by entirelybs
Well you did what so many on this site do. Took what could have been a good story and messed it up. I’m disappointed that this could have been a love story but now it’s about manipulation and dominance. I do however appreciate your writing and efforts. Cheers.
Manipulated is manipulated, not cool to play with his emotions for a competition. He should fuck them both and then dump them and go back to Aunt Jill.
Great series can’t wait for the next round with the cousins and when Julie arrives back with his mum & the sister. Hot summer days..
It seems that Jenny has turned yet again and is showing her more ruthless and selfish side. This can sure turn Jack away from all of them. It's still very well written and entertaining erotica.
So hot, such a good story that is well written with plenty of surprising sex between Cousins wow!!!!!
Honestly, the disconnects in the plot and changes in personality in this chapter vs the rest kinda kill it for me.