All Comments on 'Lust Artifact Ch. 03'

by FrictionAddiction

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Way to short

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Yes, way too short. It's kind of like teasing and leaving us hanging...but, I like the overall concept of the story and where seems to be going.

FrictionAddictionFrictionAddictionover 2 years agoAuthor

Fair. Not trying to leave anybody hanging, just still figuring out how I'm going to split the chapters up. Right now it's progression based but, I'm unsure it will stay that way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

real good but feels a little short cant wait to see whats next!

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