All Comments on 'Lust at First Sight'

by KuBal46

Sort by:
  • 1 Comment
AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I was a bit confused with this story. Was Kate asking Ben to have sex or was she asking God, because she said God's name more than she said Ben's. Try to cut back on that reference and the story will read a bit better.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous