by Azure_Wanderer
Awww, he was just a prick! Not some ill-treated geek under the constraints of puberty and akwardness.. Anyway, I love her innocence. "You ejaculated in me?" Instead of, "What the fuck you came in me?" Cute.
All I could think once I finished reading this was that I should write a story in response to this one where Sheryne's cousins or female rugby players or somebody does something equally as terrible to him. In fact, I think I will...
SexxxyCuriosity
writer put predators intent or goal in mind he got three girls to go after if this is fiction there chance there aren't people living by this example I hope not so. But keep that in mind people when your reading between the lines. How come the other broad didn't go? I just wondering for author. she didn't get curious...and followed them why did they take too long. Kind odd there. He not trying to make cult is he? What sort student is jacky? You didn't put him as thug or some sort protector guy...I still not clear what he is...is he Jock sort guy. Sounds like highschool or something or this college sounds more like story was in college.
Try make more fictional if you will make a setting where it is. otherwise people will think its real account and they call you all sorts of names. I still have issues in same sort thing. keep on working on that.
Don't complain about rape-stories as long as they are in non-con-section people. Some of us like to read em. (As long as we know they are fiction). I liked it.
...w/blackmail as insurance? I know I WOULDN'T BELIEVE you & I'm a guy!
...w/blackail as insurance? I know I WOULDN'T BELIEVE you & I'm a guy!
Its a fantasy people. But I would have liked him to be nicer. I hope the next person he rapes will really enjoy it. Keep going.
Her body may have reacted, but it wasn't consensual sex and thus rape. If she doen't go to the police now, the sisters should gang up on him, film it and expose him as a rapist.
Not to mention what revenge her boyfried could take or his own girlfriend.