All Comments on 'Lycancourse'

A bit of copy editing required. The very first paragraph: "This night is a little different, it's October thirty first; its Halloween."

Both "it's" need the apostrophe. The semicolon is in the wrong place or should not be there altogether.

Normally I can push past grammatical errors, but so many so early was a deal breaker for me.

I do not intend for this to be insulting in any way. All writing needs editing. It's my suggestion that you do more before submitting here.

Best,

Matt

I get it Matt. This one was not edited, my bad. Thank you for your input.

Very intriguing! I don't like gore much, but this love story is quite special!