All Comments on 'Lynn and Leif Forevermore Ch. 66'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
You lost me

Yeah it's great and all , you showing how Lynn is developing sexually and building trust with her husband, but Jesus Christ this is too much. It's super sappy in spots and not in a good way. And it's almost like it's a rambling manifest.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More!!!

So glad the next chapters are loaded!! Love love love this story! Yay:)

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