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"Life suddenly seems a lot better! Off to bed, before I spank you again."
"Promises, promises!"
- COMMENTS
Rockahula7 months agoNice storytelling. A couple of things to remember:
Till is something that a farmer does to his field using a tractor. I believe the word you are looking for is ‘til, the contraction for until. Secondly, the expression to try and do some thing is not correct. You should use try to instead if it shows better writing. And finally, I noticed that you said something like me being there. This should be my being there; it’s called a gerund and look it up. Please remember that proofreading is very important. It doesn’t cost you anything and it’s your opportunity to polish your work. Hope this helps.
Anonymousover 1 year agoWhat a cute little story ! I certainly enjoyed the underlying humour through all of it. I love a story with humour. A chapter or two could have been added dealing with a "ménage à trois" with Amy ... and why not add Maureen into it once in a while. Oh! ... and I like that new "christian therapy". Will have to look into it. All in all ... quite entertaining and fun to read. You deserve at least 4 stars and please keep on writing.
