All Comments on 'Mac and the Little People Ch. 06'

So I realy really realy...(Ten minutes later) realy like this story but it's frustrating to read it's just to short it's like a world class edging session that gets ruined 10 sec into it (your excited to start but upset and disappointed it ended so fast) It feels like if you combined chapters one trough proble ten they would be chapter one. My only suggestion to you are keep up the good work and make combine tree or four of your chapter together to make the enjoyment last a little longer.

Fun so far, and well written. Thank you.

I would prefer longer chapters a little further apart, but I'm grateful for your sharing however you choose to do it.

I prefer longer chapters as well. They are this length based on how much I can reasonably expect to edit in an evening