All Comments on 'Machines of Loving Grace'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

If you ever choose to do more than erotica, this world has a very strong basis concept with plenty of potential for more

UsuallyPresentUsuallyPresentalmost 3 years ago

A disturbingly erotic dystopia. Well written. As ‘Nony mentioned, this could be an intriguing setting to revisit. How’d the takeover happen? What perversions do the machines - er, Machines - prefer to use, & how do those actions affect the nobility? Do the nobility ape the Machines’ preferences, making swearing fealty pretty kinky, or do they leave such sacred techniques or diabolical manipulations to their betters? What do external forces think of such activities? Etcetera - lots of room to ‘play’!

TrueApotheosisTrueApotheosisalmost 3 years ago

As has already been said, would love to read more about this world. Perhaps expanding on the possible human origin of the machine overlords. A "technophile" engineer who reprogrammed the AI to fulfill his/her fantasy of being dominated and brainwashed by a machine, but accidently (or intentionally) let that directive run loose in the code resulting in the world we see. Even if we don't end up seeing more, this was certainly a 10/10 for me

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

That appears to be the kind of life to have. No problems or worries aside from how to squeeze out that next orgasm and cum yourself stupid. Five stars plus one to grow on. 😵‍💫

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