All Comments on 'Mackenzie, A Dinner And A Show'

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MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey7 months ago

Another great chapter! Please let him realize he fucked his daughter soon. I want to read about them fucking again.

NudeInMaineNudeInMaine7 months ago

I like this series. Just wished they were titled with consecutive numbers. I had to check the publish date to read them in order.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Somewhat rambling here and there! In need of editing and attention to typos.

202GE202GE5 months ago

"I assumed it was her pussy"? It's not believable that he didn't know the difference.

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