All Comments on 'Mackenzie's Supply Run'

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rockingtilidroprockingtilidrop7 months ago

Best yet. Keep it up

NudeInMaineNudeInMaine7 months ago

And as Mack is sucking his cock while he’s driving, he crashes the truck. The jolt cause her teeth to sever his penis. The coroner finds it in her throat during the autopsy. He dies of massive blood lose as his heart pumps it out of the stub where his erection used to be. Only Jennifer comes away unscathed.

Anyway, good story. Erotic story.

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey7 months ago

Yet another great 5 star story. Loving reading this story line.

202GE202GE5 months ago

The writing is good but the style if a bit much. I keep waiting for the truth to come out but it seems that isnt in the cards.

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