All Comments on 'Mad Dog - No More Heroes Ch. 02'

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Thank you for sharing your talents with us. I like your writing style and look forward to reading more of your work. I’m hoping they’ll lengthen as you develop your characters. The reading rate of adults varies, with the average near 300 words per minute, so your submission would take just over three minutes to read. University students and corporate executives (at least the literate ones) average closer to 600 wpm due to the sheer volume of reading materials they must absorb. It took longer to load on my device than for me to read. Just an FYI . . .