All Comments on 'Maddy Moo Cow'

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djripdjripabout 1 year ago

This is great, I love the quirky family dynamic the three of them have.

muskyboymuskyboy9 months ago

Way too long, too many characters as well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Great story. Just a little hard to follow scene changes with no clear delineation until the last one.

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Long-time writer of computer software, technical documents, papers and more boring stuff. Long-time pretend writer of fiction, erotic and other, but never put these latter 'out there.' It's time. Many of my stories take place in what I call "Mel's Universe," after the female l...