All Comments on 'Madison's Astraphobia Cure'

by Stanton57

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juanviejojuanviejo10 months ago

CINCO ESTRELLAS.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

It's called proof reading, fixing your mistakes. So many that i quit reading what ever this is supposed to be.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

We need a teen pregnancy!!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Will there be a next chapter? Too good a story to stop here!

Eagle51353Eagle5135310 months ago

Very good story. Wish it was longer and spread over months of their love making.👍

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Great story . . . Proof Reading required.

Changing verb tense in a paragraph should be avoided.

hunkiefredhunkiefred10 months ago

Fuck that was hot! We need a sequel!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

more please!!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Would have been better to slowly work up to it when they’re in bed together.

zooliciouszoolicious10 months ago

I hope they live where there's a rainy season. A long one.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

More please.

Stanton57Stanton5710 months agoAuthor

Thanks everyone for your comments! I really appreciate them!

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