All Comments on 'Madison's Game'

by rescatooor

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
one of my favourites

Wow! Realy Nice Story!

TheSolitaryManTheSolitaryManalmost 5 years ago
Perfect

Your story is extremely well written and took me to every place and emotion you had imagined for the story. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Outstanding

Ummm I would sure like to be you. I would have cleaned both of them up afterwards

crimfolkcrimfolkalmost 5 years ago
Great stuff!

Might be your first cuckold story but it was obviously not your first attempt at writing. Great vignette and I hope you'll work on some more cuckold and/or interracial themes

Cocksucker666Cocksucker666almost 5 years ago

Good story but a shame she didn’t make him clean her up afterwards and her lovers penis

brazilianguy1brazilianguy1almost 5 years ago

Well writen. Keep going

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsalmost 4 years ago

You are a talented writer. I love your descriptions. The way you can get into the mind of her husband and describe all his thoughts is special. Well done! 5*

Djmac1031Djmac1031over 2 years ago

Worth it for this line alone:

"Like bubble gum, she would wrap the guy around her little finger, all the while they were under the impression that they were the ones chewing"

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