by Paisleyanna
Good! I would have made a lot more of the attraction of the warmth of his body and cock....
I like how she discovers her penchant for nudity in the forest. Was a little concerned at his demanding and not asking, however she did respond well to it.
Hope you add more stories.
Well done!
Excellent imagery and sensuality.
Very nice eroticism.
Good characters.
More, please…
Thoroughly enjoyed it. The language was evocative and the story erotic. Excellent stuff. Now I'm off to read Astarte.
The relief from the heaviness and oppression of the city. The sensuality of the forest. The spontaneity. The stark contrast of the air and the sting of the cold water as she gasped. Her first time being naked in nature and the exhilaration she felt.
All leading to the surprise, the opening, and the intensity followed by the cries of pure pleasure. You took me there. I was her, feeling all she felt. Thank you.