by ElsieThompson
I have yet to find the perfect 5...for an erotic story 4 is my limit, and this one earned it. An original tale, with sex, humour, detail and a good story-line.. Enjoyed the ride!
Great story, and unlike 99% of the content on here, it comes across as 100% believable, as if you'd been there yourself!
Very well written . A good display of erotic-kinky mind and literary talents.
Keep up the good work. Good luck
Sam
Something about a “ church lady” satisfying her hormones with someone young enough to be her son is beyond a turn on by itself so thank you for this little story and you just got a new fan:)
The only dilemma I have now is which story of yours to read next.....Any particularly favorite you recommend?
The description of life in Loki and on UN operations, the loneliness and almost transactional relationships is very realistic. Liked it
Like all your stories, this one is very enjoyable. You relate the build up to situations and the sexual encounters in a pleasant and erotic way, and avoid the detailed blow-by-blow descriptions of sex acts in other stories that make them seem more like gynacological manuals.