by WailingSoul
DO... NOT... STOP... WRITING THIS STORY!
You've nailed it with your characters and your world. Part 1 & 2 are both 5 stars in my book, I can't imagine what's coming to be any less. You've hit a perfect balance of story and erotica, especially the buildups, and the dialog/repartee is amazing to read. Please, please keep this story going, it really is one of the best I've read here.
That's the idea! Already started on part 4! Hopefully this one doesn't take quite as long, haha