All Comments on 'Magic has Benefits Ch. 03'

by WailingSoul

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

DO... NOT... STOP... WRITING THIS STORY!

You've nailed it with your characters and your world. Part 1 & 2 are both 5 stars in my book, I can't imagine what's coming to be any less. You've hit a perfect balance of story and erotica, especially the buildups, and the dialog/repartee is amazing to read. Please, please keep this story going, it really is one of the best I've read here.

WailingSoulWailingSoulabout 1 month agoAuthor

That's the idea! Already started on part 4! Hopefully this one doesn't take quite as long, haha

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