All Comments on 'Magic Lips'

Very good start,, it could become a very interesting story. attention to detail is very good. Please continue her life and times. The heat has been kindled now she needs to grow and glow. 5stars for a great beginning.

Thank you for the feedback, since it has been liked so far I'll definitely continue to write it. It may take some time, but I'll make sure the next chapter is longer.

Good beginning. Always enjoy corruption stories if they start with people wanting righteous revenge.

Great start. I would love to know what the after math is now.