by amandamagik
Perhaps this story and scene belonged more in the "Sci-Fi" category, but it was well worth reading
It was nice to read a well-written story. I enjoyed it very much despite this genre not generally appealing to me.
I hope any sequel reveals how Karla fixed things up with Sarah after bolting from the party. There is certainly a revealing tale there!
This isn't my usual sort of story but I love it! I really hope you continue this into a series and I'll be following in case you do. Nice work!
I enjoyed reading. Your story, not my usual type but well worth the read. Hope it continues.
An interesting tale. Given Karla's proclivities I think BDSM is just fine. Bela seems quite nice but what are / were her basic needs in getting Karla and then Sarah to join her, another instalment perhaps. I'd like her to find someone to share her desires with,
5⛤
I've never been a fan of tentacle play/stories but this one may have changed that for me! Your writing was outstanding, and the sex scene was impeccably detailed and exciting. I looked for a part 2 twice before I realized I hadn't missed it (not seen it) but that there wasn't one; YET. I hope my planted seed germinates and grows because this bit of magic (another topic that I tend not to appreciate mixed with my sex stories) was fantastic and truly earned the 5-star rating it received!
Keep it up!
X-Man
I liked the story a lot. The non-conceptual and tentacle sex is not really my thing, but the concept of the ‘magic panties’ and magic charms was very interesting and quite compelling. I also like the character of Bella. I want to learn more about her and her erotic magic. There is so much potential in her character and the love or erotic charms that can weave are really intriguing. You could write a book on her and her magic. Loved it. Keep on writing it. Thank you