All Comments on 'Magic Scrolls Pt. 01'

Hot

Not hot.

Not interesting.

Not imaginative.

Not compelling.

There is no reason to care about the MC or his 'curse.' Random transformations with no rhythm or reason, that has been done as lot here.

Before you load the next chapter take a breath and reread the 'story.' Give us a reason to care about your work. Paint a world that the readers will enjoy wandering around in.