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by GrantBricksly

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chytownchytownover 1 year ago

*****For lack of the talent I would have to have to explain what I think about this story. (I WILL HAVE TO SAY TO ME YOU WROTE A BEAUTIFUL SHORT STORY). Thanks for sharing.

Djmac1031Djmac1031over 1 year ago

Cheeky bastard. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Last paragraph, "They have" -> "They've". Now it's 750.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Go to any college/uni campus and check out the "littles" with metal in their faces and bizarre colorations and you'll see that Youngblood is back and hard at work.

Nice story though.

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I'm a happily married Daddy Dom who likes to write. I don't have a lot of works, mostly because my fits of motivation come and go. And sometimes I choose to keep my writings to myself. But, I do enjoy sharing too. (I'm a bit of an exhibitionist, so I guess that goes with it..l...