All Comments on 'Magical Moments'

by _Lynn_

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Handley_PageHandley_Pageover 8 years ago
And "Tug" go the heart-strings

Another magic lesson in writing stories.

Thank you, Lynn.

Hugs

HP

PS. Please drop me a line; My newly-fixed PC does not have your details.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 8 years ago
Great

Still enjoying your stories very much.

Boyd

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Giving. I'm not sure that's the lesson.

Perhaps something closer to the fact that so many people need help. And the sad fact is that $100 is a drop in the bucket to people who don't have a place to live, have substance abuse problems, have an abusive spouse or have children they can't feed or cloth properly. So while this little fairy tale seems all happy, happy, joy, joy all it does is serve as a reminder to the all the people that need help and aren't getting it. And if some Angel showed up in my apartment with $10,000 dollars and morphed into a real person, I'd either run screaming from the room in sheer terror or faint dead away. That's called reality.

DesertPirateDesertPirateover 8 years ago
Excellent

Another wonderful story from a great writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I could be cynical, but

instead I choose to think positively about how random acts of kindness can make a world of difference to someone who isn't expecting it - brought tears to my eyes and a big smile. Well done! Yes, this is written to tug heartstrings, but so what - most of us are so often just wrapped in our lives, without "seeing" others in need around us.

(Another) "Lynn"

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Not what I was expecting....

....but I loved it. I'd rather be a giver than a taker, yes I would.

NKKMDNKKMDover 8 years ago
Warm story

Allergic reaction in the eyes, constricted feeling in the throat, tightness in the chest, warm feeling overall; it's probably a cold I've caught.😉

Good job!

srballssrballsover 8 years ago
Great story

Wonderful story you should win this contest.....I'm glad you didn't include sex

jeh2ndjeh2ndover 7 years ago

A wonderful story for the Season and a beautiful name for the angel.

Ah-lay-lee-ah, is that correct?

rightbankrightbankabout 7 years ago
a story to lift the spirits

thanks for the warm thoughts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Precious!

The author should be commended for a sweet story that was heart warming and truly inspirational! Kudos!

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