All Comments on 'Magician's Assistant Ch. 05'

good and fun had turned stupid and silly and not enjoyable in the last two chapters. end it

Great story, loved it! but a bit rushed in the last too chapters, you should have drawn it out more and heightened the anticipation great ending though

This Series is VERY good, I really hope that you have not given up on it. Please keep this going.

This was an incredible read, and I love how the suggestions/commands in the last chapter were unintentional. But, what happens now?

Surely, you won't leave the story without a better ending?! The way you stopped it was nice, and even appropriate, but I would love to see more on how she develops after this. Will James take advantage of her after he's saved her? Are the lessons already learned too deeply implanted to be removed? Can she return to her old lifestyle without a steady stream of humiliation and debasement? Will she ask James to take command of her in order to prevent others from using her?

Very curious to see what happens when she wakes up from her nap.

I was feeling very sad for her , I'm glad Derran rescued her . A very good read .