All Comments on 'Maid Wife Ch. 06'

Where will this go next? Will the dude take her on permanantly?

Well written but shame about the end

I'm curious about Big daddy Rich and his story

More, More, More!!!! I love the story and its really good writing a few mistakes but they didn't detract from the story but other than that keep it up.

It was going well until the last chapter and then the confusing end.

A person that titles themself as "Story Teller" is always the exact opposite. Nobody would ever mistake them for one, so they have to tout themselves.

Vacuous, infantile, repetitive, long-winded, and a complete fabrication ignoring reality and delving into wishful, childish fantasy. Complete waste of time and effort.

Wait, what happened at the end? Very confusing.