All Comments on 'Maiden'

You write absolutely beautifully.

Thank you so much!

Wonderful pacing. What was included, what wasn't, teased and drew out the experience. I found Marianne bratty, which I think you were going for. That she annoyed me at parts is probably a testament to your good and consistent writing. Haha. I enjoyed this. Looking forward to seeing more of your writing.

Thank you BgDaddy- I really appreciate the feedback!