- Non-Erotic
- Majgen Ch. 010
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Click hereUpon her revelation he briefly scanned her memory of the event, to ascertain she truly had not performed invasive procedures or attempted actual therapy. Looking at her memories of sharing minds with Fral, Weissme got the impression that he was looking at a clumsy and unprofessional, albeit harmless, attempt at mind sharing, that was all a fast half-hearted glance showed the Ottearon.
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Encourage or
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Knowing not how my words affect
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoThis is late feed back. I started reading this series yesterday and was immediately drawn into the story. I enjoy stories on extra mental abilities and yours is different enough to keep me curious. My major complaint is the level of violence but you don’t dwell on it so it’s acceptable for me to continue reading. I don’t understand how with their mental ability they resort to such basic physical punishment. Keep it up I will continue reading this and your other stories.
Anonymousover 10 years agofantastic story. i don't know enough about writing to complain about any writing mistakes. however, i feel as if the story is slowing down and its losing my utmost attention. havent read further than this chapter tho =] great work
Anonymousover 11 years agoI really enjoy your writing. I'll be checking out your other stories once I finish this book.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoinstead, 10 chapters in... and I'm going onto chapter 11.
Awesome read.
ellyneiover 15 years agoAuthorSorry people the full story will not be posted online. Don't start reading, contact me if you want word once it is available in book form, in the far future.
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoThere are certainly a lot of questions you have chosen to leave unanswered. I think thats a good strategy to keep the reader in suspense BUT you gotta tell us at some point lol ;-P
theMasterBaiteralmost 16 years agoThis is not only the best thing I've ever read on Lit, it's one of the best SF stories I've EVER read. And I've read a LOT of SF.
I'm not sure I understand why they apparently destroyed her sexuality but I assume it has to do with keeping her from subconciously eminating self destructive images of herself as a whore. Having others hate you because you hate yourself or be depressed because of your depression is, perhaps, not as destructive as having others despise you because you project that image of yourself.
I am only some clueless guy (tm) who can never understand abuse from a womans point of view, no matter how much I would hope to, but it seems to me that there are many points at which this story is telling the story of molest, degradation, and abuse in the real world from the authors eyes.
My fear, and it is a selfish one, is that a satisfying ending for this story may not be written at this point in the authors life.
I truly, truly, hope that is not the case... But even if it is, the story so far has been amazing.
Best wishes.
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoI trust you are going to resolve all of the questions raised about politics and sexuality. Why was Majden's development halted? What caused her self-loathing to arrise What was it in her early life that cased her problems? Your other characters seem to be rounded. I have enjoyed all of the chapters so far.
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoVery interesting and different. Would be very dissapointed if you did not finish this story.
Nicely surprised with fast appearance of the 10th chapter after the agonizing wait for the 9th.
After the 9th chapter I was contemplating suggesting more 'human' themes instead of politics but you did just that here,.
