All Comments on 'Makati Ch. 01-02'

Looking forward to more of Nancy, great start

Well written, I will continue reading.

I couldn't make it through the first page. But points given for using Spell Check (most of the time).

This story - in the space of only a few brief paragraphs - manages to be the perfect example of why people call some tourist from the U.S. "Ugly Americans". The parts about how a Rolex and having the funds to be a sex-tourists in Asia somehow demonstrates "worth" can be overlooked (they're more indicative of being self-conscious about one's penis size and needing to prove "something"), but to define all people from one country or culture as being liars or having poor oral hygiene is beyond the pale (that means "bad"). If this story was based on real events and wasn't fiction (and I'm hoping it is just a story from someone in the midst of a spankin'- the - monkey - session), I would want to know what company the author is in charge of, so I could take any and every product I own from them and fill-up the dumpster in the alley behind my house.