All Comments on 'Make a Wish'

Very nice!

This storyline could become very interesting.

Please go on.

This could be a very good start to a series in which he grows his harem with ugly or plain looking single women with no prospects of having boyfriends or lovers, who he changes into attractive sexy vixens that want to stay with him and serve him.

The next woman could be a skinny and ugly looking college girl who they meet when she delivers them some pizzas.

I've read this story somewhere else, and by a different Author!

Story sounds very familiar, though there are a lot of genie stories out there.

Still, thought it was well done and interesting. I'd definitely like to see it continued. There are a lot of things they could do.

Not sure if it is same author. This is word for word this story by paladin from 2003:

http://mcstories.com/MakeAWish/index.html

Perhaps reading the author's bio might answer the question.

"Other stories at http://www.mcstories.com/Authors/Paladin.html"

An accusation of plagiarism is a serious charge. Do the right thing and at least perform a modicum of research.

I've been writing as Paladin on some other sites for years, but could not use that name here for some reason. I meant no confusion.

PaladinInBlack also has a Tumblr account you may be interested in.

I thought this was about a dying kid who got to go to Disneyland. Boy was I wrong. Needless to say I was not turned on

I really like that he can help them to be more than they are. He should make certain that they still resemble themselves, though. The 'master' crap needs to go, though. I hate the idea of one partner being dominant or subservient is just wrong. The Jeannie thing is really cool, as is Susan getting her breasts. Though I probably wouldn't have made the change so radical. Going from an 'a' cup to a 'b' cup would have been a good change plus could have kept her friends, neighbors, and coworkers from looking at her funny. But really Tammy/Jeannie's changes were most appropriate. She was able to make important improvements to him while he could still be himself. And he needs girlfriends, not servants!

he needs to be able to make purely physical changes without messing with their minds. He could set up a business with only a handful of clients per year, making a rich guy 10years younger. or have a bigger dick etc. It would pay well enough to set them all up.

Very fun indeed! Thank you!