All Comments on 'Make it Bigger with Your Mouth'

by ghost_reader

Sort by:
  • 7 Comments
ju8streadingju8streadingabout 1 month ago

that was twisted. lol

MCJOHN11708MCJOHN11708about 1 month ago

The ending kinda ruined it. Her cheating on her husband/coercing him into giving her a hall pass for her greedy need is just really mean and insensitive.

----------

2/5. The plot was interesting, the execution could use some work.

chris2kchris2kabout 1 month ago

Loved it until the ending .i agree that lost me .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Loved it disagree with the comments. Everything was concensual and even the hall pass - what swingers do every day.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Loved it. Room for more chapters.

wewlad95wewlad9524 days ago

Wow, one of the best stories I've read, could have used a bit of non-con but otherwise 9/10.

Rollie88Rollie8823 days ago

I love this story! The only way to improve it would be to make it longer, maybe insert some demonstrations of her improved athleticism and some the multiple orgasms typical of futas. Wonderful story! I love it!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous