by ghost_reader
The ending kinda ruined it. Her cheating on her husband/coercing him into giving her a hall pass for her greedy need is just really mean and insensitive.
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2/5. The plot was interesting, the execution could use some work.
Loved it disagree with the comments. Everything was concensual and even the hall pass - what swingers do every day.
Wow, one of the best stories I've read, could have used a bit of non-con but otherwise 9/10.
I love this story! The only way to improve it would be to make it longer, maybe insert some demonstrations of her improved athleticism and some the multiple orgasms typical of futas. Wonderful story! I love it!