All Comments on 'Make it Home'

by danXdemedici

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Cane23Cane234 months ago

I liked this story very much. Unlike many dom/sub stories with humiliation and predictable outcome, the end of this story brings Tom to terms that he accepts himself and his feeling for Rory. Beautiful ending indeed.

danXdemedicidanXdemedici4 months agoAuthor

Thanks @Cane23. I wanted to explore the idea of humiliation as a projection of Tom's own self loathing. I also wanted to try and find a way to help him resolve this. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for your support!

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Humble public servant in California, enjoy writing erotica on the side. Live with one dog and three people, I like them in that order. Check out my webpage for more stories.