All Comments on 'Make Me Pregnant'

I love this

I loved this. It was well written with an interesting plot that was built and flowed nicely. The erotic scenes were perfect and the twist at the ending was a welcomed surprise.

Loved the ending.

Extremely hot, I love multi-generational incest. But if DIana knows that her brother has sex with her mom regularly...wouldn't she at least suspect that he's also her father?

Still, wonderful writing and plotting.

Great story. The ending caught me off-guard, but it made the story even better.

Outstanding work of sexiness.

I LOVE your descriptive writing.

This one is super - and very exciting and naughty....he he

Great plot line and character development too.

Many thanks.

I would have liked a longer bit about Diana’s seduction of her “brother”. Or was it truly the other way around?

I liked the twist. ****

Piss flaps? Yeah, that kinda weirds me out.

All mothers/sons/daughters/brothers/sisters, in this case Sarah, Alex, and Diana, should experience such taboo sex. If Diana becomes pregnant has a boy and he has relations with Sarah the ancestry would be amazing. A PhD in math would be needed for analyzing the family tree

Mmmm this story was recommended to me and I thoroughly enjoyed it! Xx

Quite depraved and illegal. But I liked it.

I enjoy your stories. Please keep them coming.

My buddy sent me a link to this, said it was like SamJason. He was right. Nicely done.

Would be great if Dad died and Alex moved back in t take care of her. Then he and Diana could tell her their truth and Mom could tell Diana about her Dad and they could all live happily ever fucking.

Awesome. When it comes from mom's point of view, stories are very hot. The way you write Moms emotions at first and getting into sex and u write it beautifully. When it's include Cuckold, pregnant seen, that's awesome. Write long story close to at least 20k to 30k. Short stories not good and write stories from mom's point of view. They are rare and very hot too

Loved this story and how his mother became his lover but you skipped to far ahead you should have included how he became his daughters lover and maybe he gets her pregnant also!!! Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i loved the ending !! thank you for this amazing story. 10/5

I enjoyed this work you shared. Thanks

OK, I have to take a star off for the term 'piss flaps'...

Each to their own, but that's a pretty good insult, and about as sexy as bad plastering.

Everything else is much better. Sarah's slow journey into depravity is the best part, but it switches pretty hard after that.

The epilogue is cute, I would have been disappointed if it hadn't been there too, but this was a good read!

Great work.

Omg I got so horny reading this!

finally! A story that I want to read repeatedly. One of the best I've read in Literotica. It has it all. Love, desire, incest, pregnancy, and fantasies fulfilled! Keep writing! Get his daughter pregnant and make sure mom catches them.

I enjoyed it very much, up to your usual high standards, and low morals !! However it is now over 7 weeks since this story was published and you seem to be taking longer with each one although that does not mean that the stories are getting longer themselves. come on Miss-D-mena lets have it!!!!!

"Make Mr Pregnant:" - Forty-four Year Old Fertile Mother, Sarah and Eighteen Year Old Virgin Son, Alexander; and Later Single Alex is Forty-two and His (Secret Kept) Biological Twenty Year Old Daughter, Diana--Alex's Daughter and Half-sister.

The unique, concocted story is well developed, maintaining a grand surprise when Alex is now forty-two years old, his mother Sarah is sixty-four...and their twenty year old single daughter, Diana is fucking her half-brother (her biological father)!

Normally, to me, this three-character, family incestuous menage-a-trois is an expertly developed theme--all done without the knowledge of Sarah's husband, David. Alex's father--with whom Sarah still loves dearly. Through quirks of discovery by mother Sarah, she discovers her son, Alex, has a fetish for 'older woman' mother incest. Sarah's husband David is infertile, and Sarah desperately wants another child. She realizes her son is the male that can impregnate her with his abundant fertility and big-pole dick.

Writer miss_D_mena has put together an artfully ingenuous , thrilling story of familial incest. I love it!!!

Well you jumped from the original plot of the story to him fucking his sister/daughter after claiming he stayed faithful to his mom the sudden jump damn near killed the mood you need to work into a jump like that not make it sudden and no vergin is going to have that kind of staying ability without Cumming quickly especially an 18 year old vergin but the major down fall was the sudden jump makes your story average at best

a2m on his own mother? Wtf... this went to hell quickly.

The role lucky people maybe Diana could get pregnant and They all have good sexual relationship

Any story that has to use Literotica specifically in the plot causes me to stop reading it. It makes me feel like its not a story, but an ad for the site, and takes me out of the mood

This place is a fuckin' insane asylum. User zededd2000 removed 1-Star over one term, "piss flaps". One freakin' term that he doesn't like was enough for him to punish the author. After all, that's exactly what he has done. Ya gotta love it...

5 5 5 5 yes I liked it a LOT, I'm male 20 years old it was my mams birthday my dad working away just mam and me I don't drink mam does she got a bit drunk she was sleeping on the sofa she was wearing a short skirt it was halfway up her long legs showing lot of her thighs low cut blouse showing lots of her huge breasts looking at my mam sleeping my eyes looking all over her tempting body my bllge hard in my trousers I was going to take a chance shes drunk shes seeping I knelt by her kness very slowly lifted her skirt up her lon legs up her thighs red crutchless panties very hairy cunt loved it I undid all the buttons on her blouse opened it wide open no bra huge bare breasts long nipples i got my hard cock out licking he wet cunt got over her putting my hard cock slowly into her cunt soaking wet tight for my cock making love to her slow gentle deep her body moving slowly her cunt lifting up slowly gto my hard coc her mouth opened wide gasping softly yes yes yes her eyes opened wide she looked at me panting don't stop don't stop I didn't stop when dad away working mam didn't drink she had my cock deep in her lovely wet tight cunt

Very nice don't have much to say 5 stars !!!!!!!!!!

5 mother sister randy brother yes please just like my mother my sister and me 4 years we.ve been lovers my sister pregnant my babies twice I love them both they both love my hard cocks in their mouths their cunts mam loves it in her tight arse

Said he remained faithful to his mom him fucking his sister isn't remaining faithful and let me guess the mother doesn't know about it which only signifies that he is cheating

Sorry fantasy or not I just have no respect for anyone who cheats

Having sex with a close family is incest. No matter if it is between father and daughter or brother and sister. Is it worth that a father to have sex with his daughter than a brother having sex with his sister? And it sounds like the mother isn't aware of her son, who fathered their child, is now fucking their daughter.

Years ago, my older sister came down to San Diego to visit me. She was approaching 26 years old and never married and had no children. We went out clubing and had a few drinks. We ended up acting like two teenagers and one thing led to another. I took her back to my home and we ended up making love. Yes, making love. It wasn't two people fucking. It was gentle, sweet, and caring. I must have came in her three times during the night and once again in the morning. She told me that no one ever made her feel like I did making love her. We went out to breakfast after we made love and showered. After breakfast I took her to a new housing development that was being built in San Diego. I told her that I was selling my present home and was moving up to a bigger home. I had originally planned to buy a 3 bedroom 1 bath, 2 car garage. But if I got her pregnant last night that I would want her to move down to San Diego and live with me. I told her that with our combine incomes we could live a great live and raise a beautiful family.

"The man in me Elena would love to know that I got you pregnant. I would take care of you and our baby. I would want to buy a bigger house to accommodate our family. I would love to look at a 5 bedroom, 3 bath, 4 car garage. In my heart I know that you felt last night was special for you as it was for me."

That was 12 years ago. At 40 Elena is pregnant with our fifth child.

Loved it now he needs to make his daughter pregnant 5 stars

I was wondering how this story was going to get to where the title suggests given that she was literally vomiting when she saw shopped pictures of her and her son fucking. I guess the desire to have children can be really powerful for some women. It's kind of funny though how she goes from that to having a lifelong relationship (as his mistress of sorts) with her son.

All the rules in place for a clinical fucking and impregnation, but those quickly dissolved once it felt really good. Funny how that can happen, eh? :)

It must've been a bit of a gut-punch when she said their relationship can't really be more than what it is right now. Then knowing the child your gave your mother is yours and not your father's. Very harsh. I don't know if I could deal with that. I need something deeper and more lasting. While their relationship did go on for pretty much the rest of her life (she's 64 when the story ends, which is close enough), it's not the typical type you see in these types of stories (loving, being together exclusively, etc) but there was love there, enough that they couldn't not be with each other in whatever way they could manage.

The sudden transition to the future caught me off-guard. It's nice to see they ended up sharing their love for all that time. When it then cut to him fucking some young woman, I was like "what?" Of course it turned out to be his sister/daughter and then I'm like, "yeah, that makes sense." What a family :)

That being said, the cheating aspect of this story (the mother with her husband, and then later Alex with his daughter/sister, although that one is a bit different) bothers me, but I understand it's necessary within this story, at least without majorly rewriting a lot of it - but then it would no longer be this story. I wish it had went on a little bit longer and they revealed their secrets to each other (telling the mum he's fucking their daughter, and him telling her she's his daughter). That would have been nice.

"his virulent semen"

Virulent: 1) of a disease or poison - extremely severe or harmful in its effects. 2) in general - hostile

Perhaps the author meant "virile"?

lol

Very nice. Quality writing

Yank -

Difficult reading what with the British vernacular -