All Comments on 'Making a Goddess'

I love this story. The second half was much too short and I wouldn't have minded if it had been spread to 10-12 stories.

Yes, agree. The first half was an excellent set-up. The second half was a rushed and unsatisfactory series of events. The non-con aspect and drama could have been extended much further.

I agree with other commenters last half rushed. I was all in until the development of the shield, why the need for it? especially after she said she didn't use it often. maybe something more a few years after graduation.

I do not like forced Dom/Sub; Owner/Slave stories. At the least this is a fantasy. She should have been given a way out

You are the best writer of dom/sub lesbian stories I've ever read, and this is a very welcome return to form. I loved With Strings Attached and I love Making a Goddess. Thank you!

Very good story! The characters were fun and the whole a sexy romp. It ended abruptly, and I'm always a little disappointed that I won't be reading more about interesting characters. Thanks for sharing!

Very enjoyable lesbian/slave story to read. Hope there will be more, maybe another chapter on this story line would be nice too. Maybe even bring in a male with a big cock, so both could take it for a ride instead of the usual strap on..

I liked the story - and after the 10 year saga of Alice the straight les sex slave - being a one part story was quite creative. While I would have liked more build up and detail - it was a delight as is. Thanks so much

i loved the feel of Alice and this shows you have not lost the wonderful art

Very good. Thank you.

I don't consider Vanessa asexual, while not a true lesbian, or heterosexual, she definitely loved Athena and gave herself totally and willingly. She realized her fantasy and got her hearts desire.