All Comments on 'Making a House Guest at Home'
by pumken
- 23 Comments
Anonymousover 13 years agoAbout a couple that isn't afraid of exploring new boundries. Keep up the great work.
Anonymousover 5 years agoIf something like this ever happened to me, I'd think I've died & gone to Heaven!
Anonymousover 4 years agoIt's not always I read an erotic story written by one who has a good way with words. You are a true writer and your use of figures of speech make this worth reading.
Anonymous10 months agoEXCERPT FROM THE STORY.
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... She moved the thin straps from her shoulders and with a little tug to get it over her magnificent breasts, the sheath puddle on the floor. She continued to dance with no one saying a word. She discarded the flimsy bra and let her beautiful orbs sway with her to the music. Then, the very sheer silk panties were pushed over her thighs, fell the floor. Her pussy glistened. To me she is a goddess, a feminine icon. And, she is mine. Mine forever, but tonight to share with my best friend, Mark. I know that beneath the sophisticated facade lies the soul of a temptress. Her every move is a message, a wish for you to take her and fulfill your sweetest desire.
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I gave you a 5- (4.6 = 92% = A; ★★★★★-)!
Anonymous10 months agoWomen like Marcia are complex cteatures: (a) thay can make 2 men happy; &
(b) chances are they need more than one men to be happy.
Women like her make this planet a happier place!
Marcia is a keeper. End of story. Full stop.
Anonymous10 months agoI AM COPY PASTING A COMMENT THAT I REALLY REALLY LIKED.
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Anonymous, over 12 years ago
Great Story.
About a couple that isn't afraid of exploring new boundries. Keep up the great work.
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Anonymous9 months agoExcerpt from the story (SPOILER ALER!)
"Both of us were charmed by her beauty, so simple, yet complex. Her long legs dressed only in sheer silk, her ankles beginning the shape of her legs, perfectly shaped calves, the curves of her knees leading the way towards her heavenly nest several inches above began to spark our imaginations."
This is a FIVE-STAR SEX STORY: ★★★★★!
Anonymous9 months ago5 (♥︎♥︎♥︎♥︎♥︎)!
One of best wife sharing stories.
A lot of sex,
a lot of respect,
& a lot of LOVE!
In my book this is POLYAMORY.
This husband loves his wife not only "truly, madly, deeply," but also "unconditionally" and "selflessly."
Anonymous9 months agoExcerpt from a comment published 13 days ago.
"... the curves of her knees leading the way towards her heavenly nest several inches above..."
(Niagara-on-the-Lake, Sept 04 2023)
Anonymous8 months agoEXCERPT FROM THE STORY.
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... I called Marcia to tell her the bad news. Marcia figured that all plans were off, and began to make plans to make dinner at home. She sounded very disappointed. At that point, I insisted that she and Mark go ahead and go out. She was reluctant, but I prevailed, and she agreed to take him to dinner...
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Anonymous8 months agoI really liked the comment I am copy pasting.
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Anonymous, - almost 4 years ago
Very well written.
It's not always I read an erotic story written by one who has a good way with words. You are a true writer and your use of figures of speech make this worth reading.
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This is an excellent wife sex story.
Anonymous8 months agoWhat portion of an "almost male's" brain is so corrupted to even consider having sex with his wife AND another male/or portion there of? Both have to be mentally demented, as well as she.
