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Anonymousalmost 5 years agoYes, this story truely needs a part 2, and maybe a part 3, and then maybe even more after that. You have touched on a possible treasure trove of possible future episodes!
So go and write.them for us!
luedonalmost 5 years agoBut before you do what Anonymouse said
and write any more, you should decide whether to write in first person or third person.
Are you Alex or are you telling a story as a narrator?
Apart from that, I'm sure it's many a young man's fantasy. I don't see much Reluctance or NonCconsent on the part of either character, though.
Lue
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoAgree with leu
Also at the start there was some confusion between past and present tense. Over all great story though
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