All Comments on 'Making Her Mine Pt. 01'

Please make more

Really enjoyed your story thanks

Absolutely amazing writing! Love this!

4stars it was hot he made her his anal slut in his very first fucking he didnt even touched her pussy completely ignored her wortgless pussy though she is still a virgin

and then the hot atm god she was asking for it

she never got mad whenever he humiliated her

i thought it was going to be romantic but it was hot he used her and degraded her

he should share her or pimp her out

would have given a 5 star if only ge had used enough lube

really hate anal stories with no lube

saliva and vaginal juices are not enough and dont last longer

also i love how dumb she is so easily manipulated

dont ruin it making it a love story

keep her just as she is a pain and humilation anal whore

I loved this! I have never read stories before, but I knew my husband did. I was crazy wet almost from the beginning. I wish I had been treated like that when I was younger. I mean now would be good too. But to be 19 dumb bitch whore would have been great. This is now my new favorite fantasy. I might pass it on to my husband and see if he gets some ideas… mmmmmm, oh yes please master!

Good premise, excellent writing, but the story as such I feel that it lacks fundamental details to be credible, it's not something I want to read more than once and I was already getting ahead of parts, if you polish your skills more in this aspect your stories will be truly remarkable