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Click here"Brice made a mess on your baby, daddy. I need you so bad to clean me." And now finally, she pulled his face closer to the now-cold slime on her abdomen. He began to yield to her will.
"Brice is so bad. I need my daddy to make me clean again. Please?"
Something broke inside Don's mind and he began to lick Brice's cum load from Janis' naked body. None of the other men watching made a sound. He lapped slowly, with broad sweeps of his tongue, swallowing each bit. Each lick seemed to heal whatever it was that broke, and Don felt a calm settle over him for the first time since he walked in two hours earlier.
All these other men could dirty his girl if she let them, but she would always have her daddy to clean her and make her perfect again. That's what he was doing. It had nothing to do with Brice. He was making Janis perfect again.
He would make her perfect again many times that night. Janis invited Jerome to make her dirty, but then Don slowly and reverentially made her perfect again. Nelson, Andy, Victor. And always Don to make Janis perfect again.
His daughter was such a beautiful whore, a needy slut like her mother had once been. Don had saved Tracy, and from now on it would be his job to save Janis. Again and again.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years ago"Bingo! I never know if a story might have a second chapter, so try to write in a hook or two on which I could hang a sequel if I decide to do one. OTOH, it can't be a thread the dangling of which without resolution spoils Chapter 1."
Thank-you for this comment as I too was left wondering what happened with Tracy, as there were a few Easter Eggs alluding to her cucking Don but details weren't provided and your explanation on why not, makes complete sense. I also like some of your suggestions on where to possibly take this story by getting Tracy becoming aware (and maybe involved) of Don & Janis.
donaldelliott11about 4 years agoAuthorThank you, UAlbanyGirl518
"I was confused about the wife though. At one point Don thinks she’s been faithful, but later we learn she stipulated access to more cock as part of accepting his marriage proposal. Could Don have his head in the sand on this? What happens during her sleepovers at the neighbors on poker (poke her?) night??!! "
Bingo! I never know if a story might have a second chapter, so try to write in a hook or two on which I could hang a sequel if I decide to do one. OTOH, it can't be a thread the dangling of which without resolution spoils Chapter 1.
Traci's sleepovers next door might get interesting if I go forward. I could have Tracy come home, and catch Janis with her father. Or I might take Don (or Janis) next door, and see what naughty shit Tracy gets into with the neighbors.
Thanks for the kind words. Don
UAlbanyGirl518about 4 years agoI’m not sure why this story isn’t rated higher, it was well written and I loved it!
Wait a minute, I do know why. Homophobic assholes are 1-bombing it because a guy eats another guy’s cum. You boys gotta get over this. Especially the ones who beat off to two girls fucking. Hypocrite much?
I was confused about the wife though. At one point Don thinks she’s been faithful, but later we learn she stipulated access to more cock as part of accepting his marriage proposal. Could Don have his head in the sand on this? What happens during her sleepovers at the neighbors on poker (poke her?) night??!!
cdCindy1about 4 years agoAnother great story by you. This is really hot. It doesn't have the cliche of the father fucking his daughter, which is not too realistic. However, licking the cum of other men from her daughter is such a turn on that I wish I could be Don. Licking other men's cum from her pussy would be even hotter.
Please tell us more of this story. Next chapter please.
Great writing Don.
