All Comments on 'Making Mum Tingle Ch. 02'

Another well written and gripping story, looking forward to the next one.

Enjoyed this so much, a great read.

When I read your stories I get so wet....Thank you

Great read, interesting twists in the story.

Great story. Thanks

Great story. Loved both chapters. Hope you write more.

very poor writing. Please use an editor next time.

Jack another excellent story. It felt rushed at the end. More exploration with Kay would of been nice. Also, you had some writing mistakes, which is out of character for you. Another sign you were rushing.

Looking forward to your next story.

An interesting concept, reasonably well written unfortunately spoiled by being rushed, was this a competition piece with a word limit,