All Comments on 'Making My Hot Neighbors Sluts'

Hell with the spelling it was a fuckfest.

Other than the language, it was a believable story. 4 stars for the lack of proof-reading. I hope you continue

and get the bitch to include her room mate.

Wow, what a great story. It sounds so real. To all those anonymous who complain about proof reading, but don't put their handle down in order to read what they wrote, Boo on you. No one takes what you say seriously. This is not a literary site. It's SEX site and this story is written for that purpose. I'm sure some of my stories have similar problems. Lastly it's not easy writing a story and spending hours trying to make it perfect. Things do fall through the cracks. But from my readers tell me, they all love getting off on my stories and I send them photos when ever they email me. Isn't that the real purpose. Good job Funtime.