All Comments on 'Making of a Slave Pt. 01'

This is your first story here on Lit but judging by the quality of your writing and your knowledge of proper Dom/sub etiquette, I'm hoping it won't be your only one. Can't wait to find out what happens during session 2 in part 2 of this ***** story.

more please, excellent start to what could become a long story

I am so aroused by your writing. Love to be this Dom’s boy!

I wish I had met Mark in my college years!

There’s nothing hotter for me than submitting to a dominant gay top. I’m a high-earning critical care physician and my work requires me to think and act accurately and at times aggressively. Outside of work I crave submission, preferably to a dominant top like Mark. Story made me very hard..Thanks so much.

JT

Great read, u have a real talent. Can't wait to start the next chapter. KAMS

So envious of Kurt!