All Comments on 'Making of a Slut Wife Ch. 06'

by VFR1944

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Time does fly when your having fun!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Could have been good; but your timeline is inaccurate.

The year is 1967, hubby is most likely going to Vietnam, the interstate system was still being built and sex wasn't free unless you were a hippy. Women were considered less sexual and were expected to treat sex as a duty...again unless you were a hippy or in a commune.

Of course, since hubby was off to Vietnam, it's unlikely to matter.

Otherwise, you still suck.

deolwondeolwonabout 11 years ago
Welcome back

Welcome back. Please don't make us wait so long for her next adventure.

alan13703alan13703about 11 years ago
Great story

Please continue - would love to hear about the years between then and now.

TatankaBillTatankaBillover 6 years ago
Fun to read

I won't bullshit you- your writing could use some editing. But you already do something that many writers have never learned- you just tell the story. Straight up, no embellishment or pretension, just tell the story. There is never any time when we're in doubt as to what's going on or get confused about the action. Your wife's exploits are erotic and exciting as all hell. It's been four years since the last installment. I sure hope you start writing another, and soon. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your series. Thanks for telling us!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Kudos

It's always a better read when a story is based on reality, and you did it nicely. I read all of the series and am looking forward to more. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Very nice stories!

I would like to hear your wife’s thoughts on what was happening to her during these escapades. Thanks again for the wonderful stories.

patilliepatilliealmost 5 years ago
I mean, what is he purpose

she is obviously getting off on her sluttiness, but you are not even getting a nut half the time, is watching that fun for you? and what about STD's and pregnancy, that doesnt seem to be addressed?

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