All Comments on 'Making The Perfect Husband'

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Please continue this story! There is so much more that Amy, Isabella and Chrissie can and should do to and for Mark. This was a great story and I hated for it to end!

I didn’t realize I had such submissive tendencies. What the hell am I supposed to do now!

I have to admit, I am so intrigued and interested as another Mark. All I could picture was me acting out every scene. Although, I have no wife. Having a woman dress me is really intense. She would OWN me at that point! Thanks for the great story!

Loved each chapter. Wish my wife was more controlling over me. Brain washing is such a sexy thing you never know.

Loved this!

good writing!

That was amazing!

What absolute pile of C..p. Slaves get no respect so the relatshio ship will become.e unsatisfactory to Amy and the whole thing will crumble into nothing

I think all men need to be conditioned like this and all women should be like the women in this story. 4yourpleasureiam

Incredible story, would love one be made of a new couple. Or for a man for Isabel.

Amazing stuff. Thanks for writing!

Superbe histoire j ai relu plusieurs fois

"No, I don't" and the whole thing is dead in the water. Dumber than a stump.

Fucking incredible! One of the best I've ever read. It made me throb and desperation so much. Thank you.

hot story - made me want to be Mark and be a total sissy slut.

I hope this doesn't really materialize and become reality because no human being should be put through the bad parts that Mark has suffered from Amy and Isabel it's not right and it should never ever happen hopefully this never happens is only in this story it was a great story

Wow fantastic story!

WOW, fantastic story! We both loved reading it xx

Just really stupid.

Wow!! This is an incredible story!! I was leaking in my green thong the whole time! I want to be fucked so bad right now!!! Please keep writing!

Very interesting concept! Where are you going with this? Amy will HAVE to have a "bull" soon, then a few. Mark will be a cuck no doubt. Loaned out to Amy's GF's for oral pleasures and I can even see him being "turned out" to other men for Amy's (and her friend's) enjoyment while THEY are having sex with Amy's bulls. And $$$ coming in to boot! And all can be done in the same "loving wife" tone.

I stroked my pink panty covered clitty reading every word. What a truly perfect life to live as a submissive sissy.,

please make me like Mark...please please mistress?

I love this story! Every character is very loving and supportive of Mark's efforts to support Amy's leadership in the soon-to-be female-led marriage. No meanness, no humiliation, just love.

what an incredibly sad story.

WOW, so damm hot, very well written too. as AK610, said give us more. Thank You

It was super I don't like the ending but it was super He should have been allowed to enter and blue is slow inside Amy and Amy was on her fertile time of the cycle

HOT! AWESOME! FANTASTIC! PLEASE GIVE US MORE STUFF LIKE THIS.

SUPER HOT story!!!!!

Very hot! I was hoping that just b4 giving Mark the order to come as Amy came herself, one of the bridesmades husbands would have out from a dark corner, naked and with a huge erect cock, pulled Mark's head back over the end of the bed/table and thrust it deep into his mouth and down his throat. Amy would tell him to lick it and suck it like a good girl as it would please her so. Mark would obey and get even more arroused to please her. Then when the guy was ready to explode Amy would give Mark permission and they all three would cum together, with Mark gushing more cum than any of the girls had ever seen, while the cock in his throat did the same filling Mark's throat and belly with warm sweat cream, which to Mark's surprise tasted deliscious and like the most enticing special dessert....making him long for the flavor and immediately addicted to it.

very nice story!

Wow. The best and hottest story ever. Thank you. Sure do wish I was included in a female dominated family. Sad

Nicely done an arousal from start to finish.wish I could sign up for such a research project

Nice story

if my soon to be wife did this to me i would beat her ass with a baseball bat

I absolutely love this story and I am so jealous of Mark. If only I could be in his place it would be heaven.

Loved this story Mark was not forced or beaten into submission he was sold on the idea of it much more erotic

I found it very arousing but very sad that either sex would want to dominate their partner.

I love it. I want to be the fiancee! I would have introduced the butt plug earlier, but I am a butt slut.

This was a perfect Femdom/FLR story. I enjoyed it immensely and would love to experience a similar arrangement...Where can I find an Isabella and Amy???

Lovely orgasmic writhing. Could a loving womn's cosk feel so good inside me?

This was awesome wish I was Mark i shot my cum just like he did and scooped it all up and ate it all like a good submissive sissy slut should never waste cum:

A truly amazing wonderful story of feminine transformation with a perfect beginning of a new Femdom lifestyle together for a life of servitude to his loving Mistress and dominant wife. I hope soon to live this same privileged lifestyle serving my wonderful Goddess Mistress Empress Nikki in a true Ds Femdom FLR Lifestyle marriage in lifetime servitude to my Goddess as her collared owned pet, sissy slut, domestic sissy maid, lover and slave husband. I am deeply in love and am currently being trained and feminized by my loving Empress. ❤️ Cannot wait to kneel naked in sheer stockings and garter before my Mistress collared in chastity with a large butt plug inserted for my collaring ceremony and Femdom marriage serving my Empress for life.

Loved every word and event. Well done.

I wish I can have the same experience. Love it.

Great build up. Pussy eating instruction and all. It went wrong for me with feminization direction. Lost interest. Ending was lame and no longer sexy.

A great story just loved it thanks for sharing it

What an Awesome story!!!!! Can't understand the negative comments. This is a pure fantasy and as such very enjoyable. I think you did a great job!!!!!!!!

Smoking hot story..I for one would not have to be hypnotised

Author, are you really so sad that you need to imagine this type of scenario to get yourself off?

Yeah,

no.

Yes, great concept: Men trained, by strong randy Women, as pussy worshiping/worshipping pets.

This is exactly what so many of us need!

Thank you.

Omg I'm MTF on HRT, decades now. Here back in 2012 Sum1 turned me onto sissy hypnos n i cant seem to get enuf of them or stories like them. I loved your story as well as much the thoughts into making the story. ThankYou

Perfect femdom story.

Next: same story role reversed..

Excellent story!

Loved the build-up! While I am not a huge fan on sissy stuff, I absolutely love the femdom in this story, it is exactly how I love it. Loved every moment of this!

All it really needed was a couple of I Love Yous

Loved it.. Had me feeling it was me in his place. Can’t wait for the next one. Well written.

Nicely paced. Well written. Plenty of 'preliminary' teasing. And the feminization wasn't overly obtrusive; nothing beyond panties and mani-pedis.

Only negative is that I wasn't enthralled with the ending.

I missed some breast involvement. He wasn't particularly teased with anyone's. He didn't get to touch, kiss, suck on any of them. They weren't used to tease him. And I'm surprised that none of the controlling women had him lick their assholes.

FANTASTIC story! I'd give it more than 5 stars if I could. Very imaginative. Actually loved the slow burn and build up. Each new element served to advance the story with purpose.

We need more stories like this.

I loved this story. I liked the slow build-up and the gradual increase of hurdles for the fiancé to jump, leading up to a fantastic finish. I especially liked the teasing. It was better written and crafted than 99% of stories on Literotica. I’d love to see it continued, or more like it.

This story is very good indeed. The way he slowly slides into his destiny. Wish there was more because one can not get enough of this story. So well written and arousing!

I just love this story. Very well written, sexy, fun, and super kinky. Keep it up!

I vote a lot of stories with five stars, but I'd put this at ten if I could.

I absolutely LOVED this story. It is well written and flows nicely. What I wouldn't give to be in Marks shoes...goodness! He is one lucky bastard ;)

If possible, keep adding chapters...maybe expand to show the training of the other husband. Perhaps even make them have sex together.

I was looking forward to Janice getting some sort of punishment for making Mark cheat. maybe enslaved to serve alongside mark or something. like, it's referenced twice after, seems to hint at future consequences, and then nothing. still a really hot story though

I loved the story. Please add chapters.

This is some sick fucks. Taking a perfectly wonderful guy and turn him into an ass, as in donkey. Shame on you.

One of the best stories ever!

The idea of hypnosis really perfect. males wanting to really serve need sometimes an excuse, to be totally owned! Once the male understands it is total submission, the Female can relax and simply control. The hypnosis will not be needed..

A male slave actually enjoys being dominated and used. Once training done, it needs the comfort of being owned. Any task, any order, even serving Her friends is a joy. Why? The slave doesn't make decisions, so not it's problem. Oh! Why it? A slave is no longer seen as a being but a possession.slave knows this and more. Thank You.

Where can I find Miiss Issabella? I need to be feminized and made into a sissy slave.

Wish i was Mark!

What a wonderful and erotic story! This readers cock was hard and dripping like marks the entire time — so very yummy! Thank you.

Hard. Subservient. I can be Mark...

Excellent!!

L O R

I need a wife like that

Every man needs an Amy.

But If I had a woman who would use me for my oral skills like mark is being used I would be hers forever. Love this story so much.

4yourpleasureiam

I LOVE this story, so excellent!! Thank you for writing and sharing it!!

Read this multiple times , want to be a sissy for my girlfriend and be trained to serve all women, just, like Mark. Where can I find panties like he is allowed to wear. Amy should low Mark the pleasure of eating his cum as a reward

Loved it. Love wearing my pink five inch heels, white stockings, pink lacy panties, pink very short school girl skirt , pink bra and white skimpy top for my Mistress and her friends. Love being a sissy slut!

First mention of collars and pets and I would tell miss Kirsten to go fuck herself.

Oh and the wedding would be off!

I would love to be Mark

Thank you for your story. I loved it.

It's so hard to keep a balance in a story like this, between the believable and something too fantastic. Sure, it was a bit on the impossible side but it was true enough in so many ways it just didn't matter.

I was wet the whole time when reading it.

Thank you again.

farnorthhot

I would have been more excited if his compliance was won by the use of chastity devices,sometimes with very short cages with spikes if he is proving difficult.How wonderful that these have come along,but I have left it much too late.I would recommend any young man to try it for a year with breaks(but not to be let out on demand). The writing was very good and the description of his aroused states and his frustration and begging,was superb.

If I was young again I would have a cage,then go looking for the woman who was up for it.Chastity devices are here now...don't wait for a hypnotist.

My panties were so wet while I read this lovely story.

Sums up a subservient male and dominant female wish list. Could have been even more extreme and shorter but an excellent enjoyable story.

Nice work really develops to hot steamy and blue smurf passion

Well written story

A sissy hsband how lovely omly as it shoild be

I LOVED this story and would LOVE to be conditioned and married like this!!! Good stuff!!

Marti

Fantasy at its best... Wish this could happen in real to my husband also

You all missed the point, Mark has a room full of women cumming for him. Can a old guy sign up or is it wifes invitation only. Isabella can I make a appointment?

This is the second time I've read this story. LOVED it. You have a true talent. Please give us more. And thank you.

It always amazes me that so many readers who hate a story continue to read it and then take precious time to write negative comments! This is a story, a fantasy, get over it! Read something that you like. The most impressive aspect of this offering is just how long it has attracted readers. I was impressed by the pet symbology. The combination of drugs and hypnosis to implant suggestions and triggers to bring out latent submissive tendencies. Truth be told many men are subject to this kind of mind control. Women are masters of manipulation and if they don't get their way the marriage will ultimately fail. The difference is that most women will not be so determined to turn their husband into a sissy/slut to be used by their friends. Instead, men accept the kind of sex life their wife will tolerate or their marriage will fail. I really enjoyed the "consummation" ceremony at the end of the story. It completely demonstrated his acceptance of her dominance in their relationship. It also hinted at a growing group of like minded women. The possibilities are endless!

wouldn't it be nice to have him make some knock out gas, and release it when they are all together, and make them all his slave. gee, what could he come up with? toilet, cum and piss sluts. look, I loved the story, but not the situation. I don't believe she loves her man at all, otherwise she wouldn't have wanted to change him so much. collusion from beginning to end, and all against him. there is no equal partners in this story. I love revenge, but cant see killing them. reversing the situation back onto them would be a treat and justified.

Please, more

I would like to read where Mark's brother finds out what happens and kidnaps Isabella and reverse the hypnoses, and on Amy, all the brides maids to where they become whores/sluts to there husbands/boyfriends.

What a great story

This was so powerful I could not stop from reading and dreaming . Had to finish the story, just kept reading and enjoying, to see how far she wanted her husband to be a slave. Possible if complete controlled his brain she wanted and needed a slave. . Powerful and seemed real . Enjoyed the story it over took me at times. thank you