All Comments on 'Making Work a Better Place Ch. 06'

Thanks so much for creating such an enjoyable series of stories.....probably the most enjoyable I have read in 10 years!! Love the humour, sex and the general direction the story took.

Please write more....and soon!!

Totally enjoyed the series. Very imaginative. The best I have read on letterotica. I look forward to reading more of your work.

FinalStand,

This was, by far, the BEST story I have read on Literotica! I just can't put into words how much I enjoyed this series. Please don't stop...don't let this be the last we hear of Joshua, Peggy, and Paulette. They are three great characters! Paulette had me when she wanted to watch "The Expenables" and I couldn't agree with Joshua more because I'm more than mystified that "Kill Bill, Volumes 1 & 2" didn't win an Oscar too!!!

Thanks for sharing your talent and story with us.

I just read the series for the second time. It is such a good read. You could well be the best author on the site. I loved the humor and imagination that you have shared with your readers. Please keep up the great writing. Thanks so much!

This was fun! Joshua was a wonderful change from some of your darker stuff.

Still batting .950 it seems(maybe its .966 now)

You may have a somewhat twisted thougthprocess but I really like the story! I laughed several times - hard! And the characters is actually believable whick makes it a plausible story - and those are the best!

A thoroughly enjoyable series to read! Hope to see more of josh!

Well done Amigo!

It was fun and sexy. the combination helped this slut make a big puddle

I think it would have been better for Josh to marry Peggy and then make some kind of legal arrangement with Paulette. Since Paulette is still considered male in most states since she is not a post OP-TS as yet; they would have a problem getting married since they would be considered as a gay couple. For Josh to marry Peggy and to provide for Paulette with some kind of legal contract and ceremony would make more sense and make it easier for Peggy's children future.

Yes, it would make far greater legal sense for Joshua to marry Peggy and a Paulette - Joshua marriage would have trouble being recognized but there is another overriding factor. It is Paulette who has always dreamed about the big wedding, the billowing white dress with a veil and a train and saying those magic words 'I do'. Peggy and Joshua want to give her that happiness and are willing to deal with the other difficulties because they love Paulette.

Peggy's children will still be adopted by Joshua and Paulette, so they will carry the Townsend name and legacy no matter what. As for Paulette; Joshua will try every bit as hard to get her pregnant too! :D In essence, all three get what they want in their own, bizarre and fantastical way.

Just an outstanding story. This was my second read.

Very enjoyable read. Thank you for the gift.

is that I can't give this story five stars twice. From beginning to end, it was a delightfully entertaining story to read, again and again and again. I well and truly love it!

Really enjoyed it. only problem I had is that Joshua seemed to get dumber as the story progressed. I could picture Jim Carey playing his part!

I say get them really busy with the business. Make all employees happier. Increase profits and promote all 3 while wedding and personal plans go forward. Keep Paulette as a transvestite! The sex will be more interesting.

Again, I loved it!

glad I finally read it... humour and romance...certainly a romantic comedy...

All of your stories that I've read have been good but this earns a 10 in my opinion! Could have cared less about the sex because the storyline was so great. Now finish your others....please. Way too many stories that have left us hanging. Don't ever stop writing.

Great story as always the characters and story carry you away...The sex is there but not really needed to make the story great. I wish I was as wealthy as Joshua Townsend...so I could hire you both to write and edit fulltime.

new to lit, and I had fun reading the series. If you ever continue this series, I would love to read about the wedding and the honey moon.

everything you write is simply stupendous - thanks!! :D

DM

Great story outrageously funny couldn't stop laughing. Keep up the good work. Your going to my favorites. Thanks for the laughs.

this story takes the damn prize!!!

wow. so dope ^ ^

I appreciate your comment. There is also 'Paulette, Peg, and J vs. the Amazon' which is the same crew in a one-off story.

Loved this story to bits

5*

Thank you for your writing.

This series was a joy to write ... I really should re-edit it some day.

James aka FinalStand

I read the first chapter and could stop till I finished . Very whimsical and made me smile something I haven't done in a while.

I really enjoyed reading this! I'll have to check out the other stories you've written.

Considering I've had a tough time putting word to print over the past 8 months, it feels good to have my other works proved pleasure.

Take care,

James aka FinalStand

loved your stories. Joshua is now officially one of my favorite characters ever.

... Thank you very much. He, Penny and Paulette were a blast to write. I wrote one other story about that trio ~ Paulette, Peg, and J vs. the Amazon ~ which you might enjoy as well.

Take care,

James aka FinalStand

How this story is less than a 4.9+. I've been a fan of your work for a long time, but somehow I missed this story. I admit to being a bit of a rating snob, but this has cured me! I'm convinced it may be your best storyline.

While the story certainly did ramble quite a bit; it was still an enjoyable read. You did skirt the line a few times with just how dumb Joshua was. I mean, sex with the mentally disabled ain't sexy. But overall he's just such a lovable lug. And such a nice change of pace from Cael(Life as a New Hire); whose ego actually turned me off that story before I could finish it. Joshua doesn't even seem capable of thinking he is better than someone else.

While I would have liked to seen them actually take over the company, I still think you wrapped things up well.

Great characters - and not so many you lost track of who was who - good plot lines and some nice humour thrown in too.

What was not to like !

Rapier

I know it’s been years and this author is most likely gone now but damn these were some of the most personable characters I’ve read in awhile, wish he’d have kept them going. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️