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True love, hot sex, and a poignant ending. What could go wrong?

You have proven that it's not so much what two men do together, but the Intimacy created and shared between them. And thank you for St. Barnabbas - I found myself strangely warmed.

Loved this story! I’ve been reading it in chapters on another site. Thank you for wrapping it up! Crossing my fingers! Thank you.

Thanks for sharing this story of first (true) love. It took me back to my own and also caused me to fall in love with you and Rich.

Any chance you can pick up the relationship story after Rich comes out of the bathroom wearing his jock and posing? Your description of Rich's straight chest hair was erotic perfection. BTW, I still have some bikinis from Undergear - Extreme Pouch. Damn I miss both companies.

The story's hot; the characters are totally believable (Except that not all ROTC jocks are hot studs--there are a fair number of couch potatoes.) and the development of the narrative works so damn well! But the piece de resistance for me was when big, hunky Rick wanted to bottom first. I'm 6'2 and was, in my earlier years a trim tight 180 lbs. EVERYBODY expected me to Top! I loved topping, but I also wanted my turn on the bottom! Would love to see more of your work!

Man, this was hands-down the best story I've read on this website: the feelings, the passion, every detail of both of them craving for each other, the intimate moments... This is one of those stories I'll never forget. 11/10!

Oh man, I really enjoyed this story, your plot an narrative were right on. Keep on writing, good job! Thank you.

This story is AMAZING!! I don’t normally comment on stories but with this one, I just had to. The sex, the romance, the lust - everything about this story kept me reading nonstop. It honestly made me feel the love between the two. Thank you! Please keep writing about these two and let us know how your reconnection goes!!

I hope you add to it if they together now.

So well-written, romantic, engaging and hot. Thank you.

You did a fine job of bringing emotional truth to your story with details like "Thank God I didn't pull away." To me, that was an indication of real talent. You also knew when to wrap up your story, to leave more for a sequel. Good luck in your writing endeavors!

What a great hot story. Hot Sex and Love both. Maybe you can write a followup. I would love it.

That just true love - relationship is the one you always remember since it was your discover of the pleasure of gay sex. Excellent work. Maybe a part 2 were you get back together now since the Army permits gay marriage. It reminds me of my first lover, we saw each other and he was with a group of guys (co-workers), I said hi and we exchanged a couple of words, then he pull me onto his lap and frenched kiss me (my first true one) and I took him home with me and we were together for over 16 years (sadly he had started drinking with his co-workers and I joined them - which was not good. We had our first 3 way and a few more. Then he wanted to play the field so we separated on friendly terms.) So sad, he went sex crazy. I have remained single and rarely date when I do it never works out after a few dates. Their interests and mine do not be the same.

The hairy-chested Rich was a "relief" in more than one way! And so glad that they will be reunited to love each other after these intervening years. Please consider a sequel to your loving story!

That was incredible. The portrait of your total, enthralling love for Rich was spectacular. It wasn’t just about lusting after him, it was truly LOVING everything about him. That is rarely found and even rarely well portrayed. Well done!

As an ex-naval officer I can relate in many ways to this story. Great job, and if the ending isn’t fiction ... I hope you find Harmony with each other. Sibi Aequum.

The true measure of a story is if it stands up to a second or third reading. I just finished reading this story for the 3rd time.. And it was every bit as fun, entertaining and inspiring as the first reading..

I hope that there will be a second part of the story, as they re ignite their love and passion for each other..

Looking forward to additional chapters !!

DV19

I really hope you have found your “Rich” again. The truth and love in this story shows that your love was real from the start. PLEASE comment so that we know how this has turned out! I’m dying to know

I could see myself in your story. I too enjoyed International Male, Undergear, Exercise for Men Only, Mens Workout as my first way to admire and lust after mens bodies while not being open about my sexuality in the pre internet 1980's and 90's. I only wish I had found another guy like Rich who was doing the same to explore with.

It was a very good story. I could not put it down. I hope there is a continuous off this excellent story.s

Phenomenal! It is a story I read over and over and it just gets better each time! Thank you for writing and posting your story! I’m looking forward to reading more! If only we were all so fortunate. I wanted it to go on so hopefully you’ll be able to add to and I too hope he and you both have your Rich back! Good luck!

Such a cute story, so passionate, so normal and appropriate without strange fetishes or predatory behaviour. Loved it !

I so enjoyed this sweet story. I’m just going to imagine that love sparked again in the long visit.

Exquisite! I hope for you that the two of you were able to meet again....

Great, Great Story. It must have been hard for Rich to leave but as You stated it was the 90's. I just Hope & Pray that everything works out for you both, Good Luck to both of You. Hope I'm that lucky some day.

Masterful erotic writing! Thank you for posting, a very hot story.

Five Stars and following, HairyJacques. Thank you for the footnote. I was certain I was reading a true, embellished, story. The Author is just a few years younger than me and reading this was a sexy trip down memory lane. Better believe I was getting those catalogs in the 90's. So well written! My favorite line: "His cock felt like it was the internal root of my own erection."

Hope to read more from you HairyJacques. Thanks for sharing. Bravo!

Part of me liked the story very much indeed. It is well-written (so many stories here are NOT), and the erotic/sexual tension is believable. And yet. I cannot feel that what is, essentially, a first-night stand will allow any person to then state that he "loves" another one. You may be 'in love' - mostly meaning 'in lust'. But to love someone, you need to know someone, in big and small ways, for better and for worse. We must ssume this developed, over time. but the pronouncement, at this first/second meeting, simply comes to soon - for me.

Beautiful story. I love the detail you included especially in the sex scenes. Very hot. Love at first fuck? Why not? We can all dream.

It was a sweet story, but it would have been better if Rich was a total top.

You and I share a similar fetish for hairy men and natural scents. That made this even more of a turn on to read and visualize. Bravo!

I Hope it works out this time! Give us updates! I'm rootibg for you!

That was hot AF! Fantastic!

Beautiful.Thank you for sharing!

Thank you and please let us know how and what transpire during this long visit.

This is an amazing story. I first read it... Must have been 20 years back.

A great story told with kindness and insight not seen in many submissions. I'd like to see more!!

That was a beautiful mix o fantasy, relationship, historical/cultural accuracy. Especially as it pertains to gay rights n the military. I love intemacy along w great sex. Keep writing!

This is the very best story I've read on Literotica or anywhere else! Rich is my fantasy man, but I found my own fantasy man 28 years ago. Our love affair is still passionate and exciting. Thank you for writing this exciting tale.

Great story! The thing that makes it so real and so different from most of these stories is the reciprocity. Most feature the delicate bottom boy being pummeled and the big hairy bruser always the top. That isn’t life, at least the life I know.

This is a great story that stands the test of time! Excellent.