All Comments on 'Man in the Long Black Coat'

A very good story told and a nice but incomplete ending as it is. However this should be classified non-erotic and left to be enjoyed.

I agree with the previous comment, nothing erotic here, but still lots to draw and keep the attention - please, please, please tell me that you're planning on writing more!

You didn't end the story...you just stopped writing it. This is too bad as the story was good. Was this perhaps part one?

You're skilled writer, it sucks that you didn't finish the story even after promising us an entire series!

I loved this story...I would love to see how this one ends...I hope that you continue with this story....please, please, please continue it! i hate being left hanging

Hi,

You have the start of a very good story here I do hope you will finish it

A good read for a quick short story,,but not exactly the ending i was hopeing for,,,another chaper would have worked well,or maybe you just never got around to finishing it,,,as so many others on here do,,,,,