All Comments on 'Man of My Dreams'

I thought that was brilliant. To have the man of your dreams become a reality. I hope their story doesn't end there.

To be honest it sounds a bit like another story involving men in dreams that have never met before & for some unexplained reason they dream about each other. The scenary is different yours takes place in a garage the other story takes place in Ireland. It's a nice story either way.

I really liked it. What an interesting idea for a story.

Very much like "Dream Man" by one of my favorite authors on this site DWSimon. Of course, that story was written 8 years ago. So, while not an original idea, it still was a very nice read. It was different enough to be interesting.

A welcome addition to Literotica.

This first story is well written and the story line is interesting and worthy of continuing.

"Huh? Thank me, what for?"

"Well, if you hadn't been a total bitch and ruined Davey's chances with the women around here, he might have been with someone when I turned up here. So thank you."

Killed me! I loled so hard that I couldn't help but cry! Good first story!

DONE WITH EVERYTHING

THAT WAS LITERALLY SO PERFECT OH MY GOD

I LOVE YOU AND EVERYTHING ELSE

Funny, Sweet And Sexy!

Very sexy and sweet

I agree whole heartedly! I loved this wonderful story thankyou so much for sharing it with us Pen!

Great story. Short, sweet, and sexy. Can't wait for more of your work.

So what if there are other stories about souls dreaming of their mates? There are also countless quotes about there being no original ideas anymore. The point, I reckon, lies in how the idea that is presented has been handled.

And you did so wonderfully.

I found your pace a little fast, felt the story could've been a page or two longer as these two "straight" men go through their dizzying emotions and their resulting actions/choices; I also looked forward to experiencing much more in the parts where they declare their feelings publicly. BUT that could also be because I had no desire to see the story end, of course.

Can't wait to see more from you - you should definitely do this again and again.

Blessings,

AH

I loved this.

Fantastic!

I loved this story, it was something i had never dreamed of! make more!

This deserves a ten star rating!!!

I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks Lavonya for cueing me onto this story of Penking9. What a wonderful romantic fantasy and read first thing in the morning. Even with dreaming about each other for a couple of years, I believe the sex pacing for two guy never before gay might have been a bit slower. I enjoyed reading "Man of My Dreams" very much.

It's been a while since I've looked at this, and I must say for the most part your reviews have been very kind. I am most humbly grateful for them all, good, bad and even the private ones that made me blush.

Yes, I will happily admit that this was inspired by other stories I'd read on here.

Reading this story back, I tend to agree Jim and Davey were just a tad quick getting to the hot and heavy stuff. The problem was I knew where I wanted to get them to, ie into the steamy sex, and rushed to get them there. (Or maybe they rushed me, they certainly seemed eager didn't they ;) ).

In any future writing I promise to try to restrain myself... Hmmm, now there's an idea... ;)

There are a couple of ideas kicking around in my head, and I may even get them written down one of these days, but as one of my pet hates is unfinished stories left hanging for years, I promise to only post stories that are either complete, or that stand alone without the need to read any further parts.

My thanks again.

penking9

A bit of a "fairy tale" but a 10 star one. I came twice and I'm so jealous wish I could find love like that.xX

Brilliant first effort pen. However, if a sexual partner swallows a guy’s cum, why would he care whether or not the top guy used a condom during anal intercourse? It seems to me that The cocksucker could just as well contract an STD down his throat too. In one way, Oral sex seems to mitigate the protection men get from condom use.