by nextcenturyromeo
More of the same. Each actress has her own personality. The way this is written, you could swap names and nothing would change. You are a good writer - think more about their personalities and weave them into your stories.
Loving this series. But you need to make the hero a little vulnerable during the sex, make the man of power lose his power for a while, specially when he is about to climax. The women are always moaning and groaning but our hero hardly ever moans. Please make him go crazy, please make him more vocal, please make him lose it. No man, however powerful, can resist losing himself in a tight hot pussy. You can show the power shifting from the man to the woman in those few seconds when she is about to drive him crazy and make him cum. In those vulnerable moments she can dominate him, rule him, destroy him...even kill him! You can bring in a few lusty villainesses who try to seduce and defeat our hero, tie him up and ride him in bed but he somehow manages to regain his power at the last minute and save himself! Please make this series into a Thriller.. It will be so much more fun to read.