All Comments on 'Man of War Ch. 10'

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gemman1gemman1over 4 years ago
Great Story

You are doing fine. Life on a sailing vessel/ Man of War was never easy or private. One the biggest concerns most sailors have, other then Mother Nature and Neptune, was running out of fresh water. Discipline was to be expected. Keep up the good work.

Gemman

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 4 years ago

Still enjoying this story quite a bit. I'm looking forward to reading some interesting encounters with strange foreign nations in the next few chapters. It feels like a slow-motion Star Trek to me so far, going boldly and so on.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 4 years ago
Enjoyable yarn

Still worth reading. Looking forward to new chapters and gorgeous blue women.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Yep, I'm still thoroughly enjoying this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

great story

when can we read more of the story?

Taurus59Taurus59almost 3 years ago

I am very disappointed you didn't continue writing this story. I only read it because I noticed you were still writing other stories, giving me the idea this one was finished.

tgreenalaskatgreenalaskaover 2 years ago

Nice story so far.

Would be great to see more chapters.

It felt like we were just getting to the meat of the story, would hate to see another story due off mid stream

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I would love more

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