All Comments on 'Mandatory Training'

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AnonymousAnonymous4 days ago

Divorce the cheating woman shes not worth your time. And send the videos to everyone they deserve to know what type of pig she really is.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

First part of the story was a 4+. Lacking an ending, a 0 had to be figured in. It averages out about a 2.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I thought for sure this was going to end with Rob suddenly being a closet cuck and all like "The thought of you with another man is such a turn on." Then give her permission to continue. That would have ruined it for me. I was all prepared to trash this story. But it didn't go that way. Good job.

inka2222inka222211 months ago

1 star. The bitch hasn't really suffered any loss whatsoever, other than feeling sorry for herself.

CamdudeCamdude12 months ago

For once Im on the side of the btb crowd.

Wife has issues,SERIOUS issues.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Again another story here without a Ending ! Dp any of you writers ever finish a story to the end?

Norseman123Norseman123over 1 year ago

What a fucking bitch, nice story keep them coming

BH54BH54almost 2 years ago

If it was only the 1st time trip, then maybe they could reconcile but after Eric came to Houston and she went back to it, it's over.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Dumb 🐓, the bitch is a whore. Get rid of her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I will tell you when it is finished!

DrgwngDrgwngabout 2 years ago

Yeah, this author has a really fitting name. The Mc was indecisive ATM the end of this ? Really, he was unable to end it. Why do this writer always make the hubby leave. Wifey needs to rent the dumpy apt. Wifey needs to abandon the home the way she abandoned the marriage. Drivel in every way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Brain damaged! Truely

Racerman1969gsRacerman1969gsover 2 years ago

FINALLY! One of these stories that actually sounds real.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Divorce her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Another fucking wimp with another fucking slut.

JonDoe315JonDoe315over 2 years ago

I get that there are no winners in a divorce but the guy should at least have some pride and divorced her. The beating of the lover just made it look like he wasn't a wimp but the author for some reason loves spineless hubbies who doesn't know how to deal with the wife

amygdalaamygdalaalmost 3 years ago

He didn’t file and they are still living together?? Is that what happens after so many years with one person who so blatantly betrays the covenant of marriage. The in-ability to move on, the love that they have will never be the same again. The trust and care and the image you have of the person is forever tarnished. Any words said by the adulterer is forever weighted against the lies and actions of there past. Especially those said in the midst of passion with there fellow cheater. As Rob said this affair would have continued and only stopped because she felt he knew something was wrong and that Brenda the other man’s wife would be joining him soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Divorce is the only option....go & find another woman who'll appreciate you for who you are Rob & not one that only "relied on Rob, as a friend and companion. I need his emotional support, not Eric's. The sex with Eric was different and exciting, but it wasn't real"...get real woman & she'd just be comparing her husband to Eric every time they had sex....just get rid!

InfosaugerInfosaugerabout 3 years ago

I would like a sequel, where Rob declares that he has to have a sexual relationship with another woman to restore his pride after the demeaning talk with the lover. Also to learn to be a better lover for his current wife if she still wants him or his future wife. Maybe show his wife a video to know how it feels.

JonDoe315JonDoe315about 3 years ago

in a way i wish he divorced her but then i think maybe he is trying to make her suffer and give her hope then drag it on longer b4 finally divorcing her and crushing her spirit. seriously i know ppl want happy endings but theres no way back from this.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
Reading again

Good work on the cheating lover and kicking the cheating wife out. Why no divorce?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Times change...

...but the fucking is a constant! Fun to see how technology has influenced these cheating wives stories in eleven years. Good overall job but the writing could be smoother and less choppy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

I wanted to rate this higher, but the lack of ending lowered it for me.

Huedogg2Huedogg2over 4 years ago
he's just living his life

if he files for divorce he has to give her half. If he doesn't he only has to take care of his kids.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
This author's stories

almost always end in a RAAC. Even in this case, the husband hasn't filed for divorce and talk to the cunt. The husbands are all accepting cucks. Just boring

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Reading again

Pretty decent story. I love the way that Rob unloaded on Div and the dumped the cheating wife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Loved this Story

I Like reading about Men who Caught their wives .. Men who do not get turned on by their wives cheating .. I caught My wife Cheating and No I was Not turned on By it . I did Thank Her New Soulmate for saving Me My time .. I then found a Sweet Lady and We both Signed a prenup saying that if either one catches the other One having an affair. They only get 30% instead of the 50 - 50 split .. Trust Me I love Her and Trust Her ..

jtwheelsjtwheelsalmost 5 years ago
Anonymous 5/22 and 26thnc said it very well

Both cheaters needed more much more punishment

Big cocks fillet nicely

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
WELL, AT LEAST;

STORY WAS JUST OK, EVERYTHING, TODAY COMES DOWN TO THE BIGGEST COCK, NOTHING IN LIFE, CHARACTER, MORALS, HOW GOOD A PERSON, HUSBAND, DAD, PROVIDER, A MAN IS, IF, AND WHEN SHE MEETS A GUY THAT HAS A BIGGER COCK, EVERYTHING IS OVER FOR THE HUSBAND. I, DON'T READ LITEROTICA SITE, VERY MUCH ANYMORE. IT JUST GOT TO BORING ALL THE HUSBANDS ARE EITHER WIMPS, THAT ACCEPT WHATEVER HAPPENS, OR LIKE I SAY THEY GET OUSTED, BY A BIGGER COCK.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
re: divorce and violent

maybe the two of you can get together and hold each others private part after all incest isn't illegal in Kentucky.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Divorce

She should divorce Rob ,he is never going to take back and marry Eric,who is a much nicer person.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
divorce?

Just because he hasn't filed doesn't mean you will ever be together. There are many REAL Christians out there who believe in their VOWS. Just because they can't be with the one they promised to love doesn't mean they will move on in contrast to their beliefs.

The certificate may be whole but you WILL suffer the emotional loss for the rest of your life - as it should be.

Smokepole

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Violent

Tim, you're full of shit. Married for 28 years, and now violent only with her cheating partner. I would have killed him. She is in no danger, or he would already have done for her. You sir, are truly an idiot.

timrivtimrivalmost 6 years ago

Hubby’s a pretty violent guy, even if they got back together he would make her life miserable not trusting her and letting her know it at every turn might even hurt her eventually. I think she should move on with her life, see if Eric was able to salvage his marriage and if not move to Dallas and see what might happen between them.

tazz317tazz317about 6 years ago
THERE IS NOT MUCH IN TRAINING

as in remembering old vows, TK U MLJ LV NV

CumminginsiderherCumminginsiderherabout 6 years ago
My friend exacted Ultimate Revenge on his EX

He was pretty sure she was cheating and had me do the leg and camera work. When I handed him the stuff I sat with him for 6 days while he went thru Hell. Mostly to fend her and her pissed off lover away but also to pick up the pieces and give him a shoulder to cry on.. Her Lover did get to my friend one time the day after I left and my even though he as just over 6' and my friend was 5'7", I was proud as to how he held his own. The next day I went over to this losers place and systematically broke 17 bones in his body. I'm 6'7" 260 lb's of 7 days a week weight and cardio training as well as 18 1/2 total years in the Navy and the Guards. He said she had put him up to it, so I told him about it and he did something stupid but they couldn't trace it back to him. He caught her drunk and passed out at her sister's and took a knife to her Clit. She will not only never have an orgasm again, she will never enjoy sex again. Everyone knew he did it but the cops couldn't prove it. I gave him an iron-clad alibi. That's what friends do for friends.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I know

no man in his right mind would take you back... so just "Head 'em up and move 'e out" just like the song says

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
which kind of a man he will be

if he takes her back?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Wordy nonsense

And of course he beats the bf while leaving the wife untouched and undivorced.

BfreetorunBfreetorunabout 7 years ago
Dump her cheating ass in the ditch. At least he beat Eric up.

I think he should tie her to a bed and hit her in a lot of places that don't show up the next day, internal injuries, etc. First pretend to forgive her and move back with her then beat the dog crap out of her and tell her that you just did it for revenge. Take some long handled locking pliers and run them up her pussy and clamp down on something and leave it overnight. She deserves it. Not for the first time, maybe but for sure the others.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
true lifeserial cheating wife has no remorse

Always on prowl

Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com details why she lost her college instructor job in Helena Montana

Factual no spam just honest 411

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
1*

cuck shit.

sugnasugnaover 8 years ago
I am with Tw0Cr0ws

Why get divorced? At 48 and with two grown kids, who would want to do it again? What he should do is hide his assets and work on spin control - he needs to let the world know what a stupid slut his wife is - including the kids. How she selfishly cheated on her husband and kids and destroyed their family. She needs to be alienated from her kids, family and friends. Let her enjoy the bitter fruit of her cheating. If he finds a decent woman he can live with her. Unless she needs his health insurance why marry her? On the plus side, not divorcing is keeping the stupid, cheating slut's hopes up as she lives each day in limbo.

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsover 8 years ago
so many....

So many comments upset that he hasn't filed.

As long as he does not file he does not need to share his assets with her.

And all the while she clings to false hope that he will come back.

As revenge goes not bad, not over the top but he won't end up in jail for it either.

The only reason to divorce would be to marry another, but most men after being cheated on take a long time to get to trusting any woman.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 8 years ago
Damn

I read my previous comment, not counting spelling corrections. I was wrong. He did leave her. He just hasn't filed yet. He should. there is no going back. Fucking married cunt and her asshole married lover did the worst thing possible to their spouses. Oh yeah the whore regrets it now. The husband was right when he said she was only sorry that she was caught. As far as the jerkoff, he not only got the shit kicked out of him, he lost his loving, faithful wife and family. And the wife said to please not ruin his marriage also. Fucking worthless stupid cunt wife er future ex-wife. The sex was new and exciting. FUCK HER

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
3*

Would have been more if he had filed. Looks like the story was left open to a reconciliation of her cheating ass. Gave you an extra one for the beating he gave her walking cock.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
1*

bitch was unrepentant. she needed burning.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Another chapter

Would like another chapter of this tale. Wife needs to better understand what she did to him. From hearing her final comments she only needs Rob for his companionship and emotional support. Nothing was said about his sexual support. She doesn't need to hurt him anymore by getting back together unless she could be happy sexually which is the pain Rob is feeling right now. No man is happy just to be the best friend and know his wife wants more or someone else sexually.

seekerazseekerazalmost 9 years ago
so, she gets away with it

lying for 3 years, betraying for 3 years, deceiving for 3 years and rob rolls over like a cheap rug. She is sorry that she got caught not for the betrayal. Reconciliation is always good with me if there is true remorse and repentance. That wasn't the case with Alice. Rob will always be second best.

The writing is good and kept my attention throughout. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

The ending should have been where he dumped her cheating ass with a very public divorce. She had absolutely no thought of her husband when she was out getting screwed. Why should he give her any consideration when he screws her in a divorce.

sinsational83sinsational83about 9 years ago
*************

I liked reading this story, it is a good one. Never-the-less I would like as other readers would, if you were to write a second part of this one to let the readers know what happened. Things like whether or not they did get back together or not, and if not did she and Eric get together as two cheaters. and if they were faithful to each other or if they cheated on each other. Once again good story.

Tim413413Tim413413over 9 years ago
A very good story.

Probably mirrored some people's lives. I once met a wonderful woman at a training seminar. All that happened at that time was going, with 10-12 others, to a well-lit bar with dancing. Oh, I did walk her back to her hotel and said good night at the hotel's front door. BUT, six months later, when I was 99.3% certain my wife was cheating with a co-worker of hers, I reconnected with the lady from the training week. We are now married. BTW, my first wife eventually confessed her affair.

ohyessssssohyessssssover 9 years ago
fool

Divorce the piece of shit. Why the fuck would you delay?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
He did not file?

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
low rating

Tell me why he was even talking to the piece of shit. DIVORCE....After sending copies of the cd to her family and friends... I for one would have no trouble dragging that pig through the trough. RECONCILIATION....notin this lifetime

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
semenfuncpl3 impossible stupid

How fucking clueless must you be to actually think posting under a nickname like "semenfuncpl3" makes someone no longer anonymous? Only a clueless closet cuckold whose life is on this forum could think something so fucking asinine.

semofuncpl3semofuncpl3about 10 years ago
Why?

It seems to me that all the chicken shit comments are from Anonymous commenters Could it be that they are all cuckold wimpy assed pussies? The only thing wrong with Rob is that he didn't drop both their bodies in a deep lake.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
cantbuyaclue lost

his tiny pecker, his last brain cell, and the bus token to take him back to the psych ward

SkibumSkibumover 10 years ago
Everyone lost?

I agree with anonymous that everyone lost, but how could anyone not want to see the cheated husband get some well deserved vengeance on the asshole that seduced his wife? In a just world a husband would not be penalized for fucking the wife's lover. I would have had no problem with Eric "disappearing", never to be seen again by anyone. Would have been better for Eric's wife, also... saved her the hassle of divorcing him. Anonymous, you need to get over the whole "modern, sensitive man" crap and allow a man to stand up for what is right. Just because our watered down, candy-ass society frowns on real justice doesn't mean we should roll over for whomever does us wrong.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Everyone lost

But I would have liked to see him press assault charges against the husband. Cause him to lose his job and spend some time in jail. At least then she would have gotten a lot more of the assets in the divorce. File when he's in jail - a win for her.

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 10 years ago
Nice ending -

Rob is a right kind of guy

The cheaters are the wrong kind of people - if they are lucky they learned something - maybe even grew up a bit and understand what is truly important - maybe not -

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
nice write

hope you stick to not being a woosee......bill

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
6/1/13

Sounds like nothing more than a cheating cunt that got caught at some point.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
how is this erotic?

Didn't come here to read a transcription of the Jerry Springer show.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
"violent husband"?

Anonymous 6/1/13: I hope you were kidding about Rob going to jail and his thoughtless cunt of a wife filing!

She showed no concern for her husband of 28 years by cheating on him and, almost worse, by extolling her lover's sexual prowess over Rob to this jerk. He had video and audio recordings that could be used fo defeat her and her lover. Eric deserved the "treatment" he got for invading and destroying a marriage! She deserves a messy, public divorce that shows family and friends just what kind of a slut she was and is!

She would never be satisfied by her husband again as evidenced by faking her orgasms.

Cut her loose quickly and get the house!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
And the cheaters get caught

Oh well. Unfortunately I didn't feel much emotion in this story and as a result, I hope that Rob got sent to jail for a LONG time for assault and battery. That way she could have filed for the obviously coming divorce and taken 90% of the assets. Screw the violent husband, he got what he deserved!

semofuncpl3semofuncpl3over 11 years ago
The story

doesn't indicate that Rob went back, only they were talking. Definitely should stay away from the cunt.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Hey Brain....

I loved your story..and feel sorry for you..If you

could let me know where Rob is perhaps I could

talk to him and tell him how you feel and how all

this might have happened..or maybe you and I

might hook up and I could use my "Big Dick" on

your sorry ass??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Oh boo hoo betrayedlikeasoftcunt has been cucked so hard

wonder who is fucking your baby now betrayed?

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 12 years ago
Contine

ASSHOLE. Noboby's perfect.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 12 years ago
WHAT?????

ROB DIDN"T LEAVE? He stayed with his cheating wife? What the fuck is wrong with him?

Asshle story by another asshole author.

FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I gave it ...

... 4 stars for the story, not for the characters. The husband's in denial and is not a wimp. The woman he loved and raised two kids with for 28 years not only cheated on him in their bed but belittled him to her fuck buddy with praise of how much better he is than her husband and through her actions of "doing things" she never did with her spouse. Any human would question his own responsibility for what happen. The only thing that would get him through this is anger. He'll never get past the resentment because he'll always feel the pain. I agree with the person asked for another chapter. Rob needs his revenge, Eric hasn’t suffered enough a law suit maybe, he certainly needs to loose his job. The whore needs to be drug through the mud. Exposed for what she is, loose everything friends, family, job and end alone destitute and shamed. A little bit of jail time would be nice, perhaps for stealing or drunk driving. Then Rob should live well, happy and content but not remarry he’ll never trust another woman as long as he lives.

Note to the author a bit more sex is needed perhaps a review of the DVD where she was “doing things” she didn’t do with her husband. After all Eric’s got a big dick she has an asshole, it is suppose to be erotic literature.

UndrApprctdUndrApprctdover 12 years ago
Problems with your ending, AGAIN

The endings are very unsatisfying and unrealistic, and they ruin otherwise outstanding stories. This wife has no redeeming qualities as a mate; why is she still around?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Unfortunately, the male character was a wimp!

Not your best story, author. The slut wife gets away with the affair with no consequences, the comical boy friend gets off easy and the moronic male character husband has no balls whatsoever and fails to grow any [to get any measurable revenge on the cheating assholes]. Disappointing to say the least, this sucks almost as bad as that garbage that MattM spews and that dickless idiot shoe-no-IQ gets off on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
castrated cucks like the ped0

huecuck, Random, poopchoot, cuckeye and wannabe cucks everywhere dislike this story because hubby was not humiliated enough. Closet cucks get off on hubby getting heavy doses of creampies and sloppy seconds

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
This author just loves making a cuckold husband into a wimp.

Title says it all. Common to the author's pathetic tales.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
You Know What?

I think this story needs another chapter. I can not deside in my own mind, if they should get back together or just end it with a divorce. It is obvious that they still love each other (more obvious being that he still loves her). I don't even know which ending I would enjoy most. On one hand, I always loved happy endings, thus I would like a happy ending (for both of the main characters, I don't like those one sided happy endings because they are cop-outs). On the other hand, I can see how Rob would be disallusioned about his wife and 28 year marriage. I guess that Rob would have to consider the fact that he is unlikely to find someone to share the rest of his life with him, which could/should be a desiding factor in his decision. Please write a second chater to tell us which choice will or should be made.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great comments from BigJohn601 and anon right below.

Glad he got rid of the slut and grew some balls back. Based upon the array of different comments, the clown called; shoe sounds like a real classic troll.

BigJohn601BigJohn601about 13 years ago
Not once, no just twice but an ongoing full fledged emotional, sexual affair....

Burn the bitch down and get on with life. The great thing about getting older is there are alot of available women for men of his age.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Yep, just another cheating slut that the idiot size 14 & his fag sidekick will attempt to defend this slut's sainthood.

Without a doubt, this skank ex-wife deserves her self-centered loneliness and the husband got mild revenge on the two cheaters [not enough by any real definition of revenge].

So come on, "size 14 phil buddy" and your loyal cock sucking counterpart "mancelt" [what kind of fag alias is that?] - put your size 14 IQ to task here and defend this slut with your boring drivel.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
liked it

She did what she did and Rob did what he had to do. The choice for her was to lie and she has no sense that it was truly a bad thing to do there. Eric was punished too. The anger would dissipate and truly Rob must believe another Eric can't be dismissed. Choices and consequences.

YornHYornHabout 14 years ago
Finally, a MAN not a wimp - although....

it sounds like Rob is coming back for more. - UNBELIEVABLE - after Alice's serial unfaithfulness, he would NEVER be able to trust her again and after the treatment she gave to him - and the derogatory comments to her lover, not to mention cutting off Rob both physically and emotionally - why would he evr consider takig her back?

He sounds like a nice guy and there ARE nice, honest women out there - although hard to find.

Alice and Eric deserve each other - two of a kind - good ridance.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
now that what a man do

you fuck my wife a fuck you up.that's the law of the street.you don't reward the spouse who cheated.by letting them come back home or getting back together like nothing happen.

dreamcatcher101dreamcatcher101almost 15 years ago
great story

I also agree with Harry's review of the story He got to all the points and explained them,I could not have done it better..She knew what She was going to do no matter what She was saying..There was no way that She loved and adored Her Husband or even cared for Him,She showed that at every level of the story..Even worried more about the Lovers marriage then Her own..And all the lies told and not told by by Her right to the end showed how untrustworthy She really was..His reactions were real including the throwing up when watching that Slut that He thought was His Friend and "loving Wife" do it in His own Bed with Eric..As for sorry,She only was that because She got caught..Divorce is the only option here..He could never forget the words He heard Her say to Eric as she verbally castrated Him and what He watched them do..If Brenda and Rob got together after his divorce that would have been the ultimate revenge..But the story was left to open ended..I am getting the idea that You do that on purpose to get this much feed back lol

zed0zed0about 15 years ago
I think . . .

. . . this author is trying to work through his inner wimp. I believe in time he will be able to grow testicles and release his inner wimp, then divorce the cheating slut wife.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I wonder

Your stories are interesting and well written, but I wonder why your cuckold husbands are so forgiving and try so hard to save their marriages even though they realize they won't be able most likely to trust their wives again, or please them the way their lovers did? Cheating is a terrible thing, repeated cheating is extremely humiliating. How can you expect that a man would consider to share his life and have sex with a woman who said to her lover that he -the lover- is a better sexual partner, better hung, and that he makes her feel things that her cuckold husband never could. That for me is the verbal equivalent of a surgical castration. Only a man with a very low self esteem can put up with that. Again, these are your stories, and you are the man, but I just wonder...

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
kick her

kick her to the curb,what's this bullshit at the end,she treated him like a piece of shit, what he did was not revenge it was common sense.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
mandatory end

i saw where it could go, and was not disappointed. she and eric got theirs, but more is not a bad thing. eric was ruined, as mauch as he could be, and paid a serious price. she may be separated, but husband seems to smart not end w her and rebuild his life on a happier note. consequences are a good thing here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
SICK

This author is sick, what would it take for two people to get a divorce in his stories one would have to kill somebody. Please yoy ruin some good story lines with your totally foolish endings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Fantastic Read

One of the very best I've read in this particular genre. You set up the story and the characters so well... my heart was racing I got to the part where Alice got caught. Excellent! Thank You.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great story! and Best Review Harryin VA ever made

This a great story. Much better than anything else this author has done. Harryin VA's review was also detail readable and rational. I also liked the slow incremental steps the wife took from being faithful to a drunken 1 night stand to a full blown sexual affair. Good review Harry!

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 15 years ago
Great work!

Very well written AND unusually well thought through (which is a much more rare phenomenon!). You provide deep insights into the self deceptions involved in the mind set of a cheater. The interesting fact is that this self deceptions and gradual slippery slopes are not unique to adulterers, so people can regognize (if they are honest with themselves) bits and pieces of themselves in the wife's self disclosure.

Great work! Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
wimp

Gets 0 only cause he didn't file for divorce yet!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
A better story....

This was much better than "Playing the Game". You did a better job of creating characters and the ending was more realistic. You left it open ended, which is often the best in this case. For me, not much of a chance for reconciliation, but to each his or he own.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Fuck Master Beast

The last hubby that tried to get violent with me. I kicked his ass.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Wimp, no divorce!

what would it take to get a divorce from this gal? All the therapy from all the Dr's you can find ain't going to unfuck her by the other guy. Do you think DON would let us all line up on his MOM?? Come on don, put your Mommie where your mouth is.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Story is well written however....

take a lesson from "the celt" on how to correctly finish a "consequences story". Even JPB usually creates a ending for his wimpy stories. Perhaps the author was hoping for to get credit for creating a "soap-opera" episode [typical cliff-hanging endings]?

The comment from Donxxxx was so screwed up, we are still wondering what sort of chemicals was he on at that moment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Good Story

A very well written tale about infidelity and it's consequences in a LOVING relationship of 28 years....Rob vented his anger on Eric, physically and through loss of marriage, and has given his wife the cold shoulder for 6 months....so much harder to vent on her after 28 years and 2 kids....I agree that now that his hostility has evaporated, perhaps therapy is needed as a foundation for the rebuilding of trust....which will take a whole lot longer. To those who claim that Rob is a wimp....I ask how you justify that, he stood his ground, beat up Eric, ruined Eric's marriage and hopes for getting closer to the daughter, and has been curt with his wife....the ONLY thing ha has not done is divorce, but after 28 years there still remains an emotional atacthment. Great work, keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
wimp

No divorce is wimpy. And in regards to, Don gave the story 100: Could it have been insanity?!?!

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