All Comments on 'Mandy Inside Paradise'

by gunhilltrain

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gunhilltraingunhilltrain4 months agoAuthor
Thank you.

The immediate sequel that afternoon, "Mandy Outside Paradise," is perhaps a bit more upbeat. She is indeed on the sidewalk to meet him when he comes out after his shift is over.

VerbalAbuseVerbalAbuse3 months ago

I've read several of your stories, "Mandy Outside Paradise" included. This one I liked best.

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Time and place matter I suppose. At present I'm between the Metro-North (formerly New York Central) Harlem Division and the NYC Transit Authority's #2 train line. Thus I'm on both the wrong side and the right side of the tracks at the same time. Anyway, for me the Midnight Sp...